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ariah347

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Coffee - Freshly Roasted

    Hiya Kate! As I drink my morning coffee here in the mid-west morning of the ole US of A, I came across this ditty about the cup of joe and ...

    Jun 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Whispers of the soul

    WOW!!!! This is the creme da la creme of romance! We need a centerpiece to celebrate effectively. Be prepared to see it in the middle of this review. That is, ...

    Jun 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Haunting Desire

    Hello Alpacaboss! All hail the alpacas!!!! 🙌🙌 Okay... now that that's out of the way, let's get into the review. First things first, this had me visualizing every step of ...

    Jun 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Go Where The Wild Flowers Bloom

    Hellooo Rebel! Here to leave a review. Hope you're hungry because I'll be serving an original Oreo cookie style commentary. I've spent some time away from YSW, but am eager ...

    Apr 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: It never stops

    Hello, illy7896. Here to review this ditty that "never stops"-- Never stops to be amazing! There are many great things here and not at all any critiques! 1) The use ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: A Rainy Day in April.

    It's a rainy day in April for me too. The irony made me click on the title as well as the fact that this is featured. Let's get into my ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Normal

    Hello Logan15! Welcome to YSW - appears you haven't been here awhile! I'm just getting back here myself and happened upon this little ditty to review. For starters, let's take ...

    Mar 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: You deserve smiles like stars.

    WOWZA! This is DEEP! I have been busy (master's degree + puppy + teaching career = no YSW!), but am back to this little sanctuary of writer's dreams. It has ...

    Mar 12, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: My Window

    Hey JSadler! Welcome to YSW! I am a big poetry fanatic [my favorite to read/review]. I saw this in the green room & figured I'd give it a review. I'll ...

    Jan 14, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 3

    I had to know what happened next! So, KJ, can I call you KJ? I had to review these in succession - they were that worthy of continuous reading and ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 2

    Annnnd we're back! Hey again Kaia! Have you dipped your cookie in some milk yet? I hope you're not lactose intolerant because we're back at it again with another Oreo! ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 1

    Wow what an opener! I had to reread that because I was (°ロ°). Okay, now that's out of the way, let's get to the commentary. I hope you're hungry because ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Called Poem

    Hello Ora! This is probably the quickest review turn-around I've done seeing how you just posted this! One of my goals for the weekend is to earn 3 stars so ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Righteousness

    Hellooo persophone! I saw this as a featured piece and decided to give it a read - I am very happy I did!! I loved it! I hope you're hungry ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We Weather the Seasons

    and we weather the seasons, as the seasons weather us. we season the weather, the weather seasons us. ┊┊╭━╮┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊ ━━╋━╯┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊┊

    Dec 9, 2023


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