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Re: There once was a boy...
Okay with such a diffrent piece I am going to take a diffrent approach than how I normally review. Lets get craking. Paragraph 1 Great start. You had me intruiged ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Dry Your Eyes with Me
Hey there! So intresting piece and very excited to review. What I liked: 1. The originality. This isn't like what I have seen before, which is good. Your taking your ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Fire
Hey there. So I feel its best if I great straight to the point. What I liked: 1. Repeatition. The way you used repeatition here was done well and I ...
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: Humanity
Hi there. This is a really good and intresting piece. What I liked: 1. The idea. You have an intresting perspective on humanity. While some may not agree with it ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: Am I the only one?
Hey there! aouther2b here with my review of this intresting piece. What I liked: 1. The language. Your use of figurative language is strong and very present. helping add to ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: Mortality
Oh god, this is what poetry is all about! I feel honored to get to review it! What I liked: (besides EVERYTHING) 1. The flow. It is so smooth. For ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: .
Hey there. This is such a unique piece and I am so glad I get to review it! Here we go. What I liked: 1. The imagery. Your use of ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: Listen, Please
Hey there. This is such a beautiful piece that I am so glad I get to review it! Here we go. What I liked: 1. The flow. You kept things ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: A Suicidal Girl
This was such a dark and deep piece that I just knew I needed to review it right away. What I liked: 1. The emotion. You got deep, really deep. ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: They Will Never Understand.
Hey there. I loved this particular piece for a few reason, and yet I feel there are ways to make it better. What I liked: 1. The idea. So many ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Silence
This immediatly pulled me in. I am trying to learn sign language and in doing so I also want to know what it's like from those who are deaf so ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: Homeless
Wow I freaking love this!!! I can't wait to get my review on! What I loved (not just liked but loved!): 1. The meaning. The idea. The whatever you want ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: A Selfish Friend.
Hey there! I am so excited to review this piece for you! Here we go! What I liked: 1. The rhyme. This is what will set your poem apart from ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Lost Innocence
Hi there and Happy Review Day!! I am going to do something diffrent for your poem than how I normally review which is to state what I liked then what ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Train Ride to Nowhere
Here there and Happy Review Day!! lol I'm not part of a team so I will try to do this review justice on my own. So, here we go!! What ...
Jun 30, 2013
