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Re: Summer Teardrops
Hi! Anon5 here to review your work. I would like to begin by pointing out how beautifully you managed to arrange this poem. Well done! Here are some of the ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: I'm Melting...
Hi! Anon5 here to review your poem. Before all else, I would like to pat you on the back and say: good job. You've written a poem! And not everyone ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: How to Cry
Hi! Anon5 here to review your poem. I would like to start off by congratulating you; you are a capable poet. It is often hard for a writer to find ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: I Am Too Strong
Hi... This is interesting, I would say. It takes the form of a poem written by someone who is not weighed down upon by the hazardous rules of writing. I ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: To Love a Killer
Hi, As soon as I read your poem, I felt a wave of disturbance bloom in my chest. This isn't bad, of course. It is absolutely necessary for a successful ...
Oct 21, 2014 -
Re: Kill Me Please
Hey! Wow... I mean... This is quite intense. It's straight to the point, emotional, and realistic. What I do sincerely wish, however, is that this doesn't actually apply to you. ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: A Bird Without Wings
Hey! Quite a poem you've got there! I like the way you write. It's simple, fresh, and not too demanding of the reader. I got the message from the first ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Untitled No. 1
Hey! Let me just point this out... I have a thing for mysterious titles. They thrill me. Yours definitely pulled me in. I wanted to know more, and it's quite ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Axis
Hey! I think this is one of the best pieces I've read so far... When I read poetry, I usually like to enjoy the intensity of the language used. It ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Which way do I go?
Hey! I think this is beautiful. I love the idea and I love the format; it says a lot about the narrator in general. I'm not sure if this actually ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Rose Lip
Bravo! This thrilled me. I think everyone who reads this is going to get the message right away. It's a beautiful way of conveying it. If anything, I'd keep it ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Petra
Hello! Okay, let me be honest here... Wow. I surely wasn't expecting that when I read "Petra" as a title. I think you have a very good flow of words. ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: De Frog Wizard
Hello! Well, I'll be honest with you. I actually enjoyed reading this poem. Yes, it did not really make that much sense to me but it surely is out of ...
Feb 14, 2013
