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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Summer Teardrops

    Hi! Anon5 here to review your work. I would like to begin by pointing out how beautifully you managed to arrange this poem. Well done! Here are some of the ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: I'm Melting...

    Hi! Anon5 here to review your poem. Before all else, I would like to pat you on the back and say: good job. You've written a poem! And not everyone ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: How to Cry

    Hi! Anon5 here to review your poem. I would like to start off by congratulating you; you are a capable poet. It is often hard for a writer to find ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Am Too Strong

    Hi... This is interesting, I would say. It takes the form of a poem written by someone who is not weighed down upon by the hazardous rules of writing. I ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: To Love a Killer

    Hi, As soon as I read your poem, I felt a wave of disturbance bloom in my chest. This isn't bad, of course. It is absolutely necessary for a successful ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Kill Me Please

    Hey! Wow... I mean... This is quite intense. It's straight to the point, emotional, and realistic. What I do sincerely wish, however, is that this doesn't actually apply to you. ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Bird Without Wings

    Hey! Quite a poem you've got there! I like the way you write. It's simple, fresh, and not too demanding of the reader. I got the message from the first ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Untitled No. 1

    Hey! Let me just point this out... I have a thing for mysterious titles. They thrill me. Yours definitely pulled me in. I wanted to know more, and it's quite ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Axis

    Hey! I think this is one of the best pieces I've read so far... When I read poetry, I usually like to enjoy the intensity of the language used. It ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Which way do I go?

    Hey! I think this is beautiful. I love the idea and I love the format; it says a lot about the narrator in general. I'm not sure if this actually ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Rose Lip

    Bravo! This thrilled me. I think everyone who reads this is going to get the message right away. It's a beautiful way of conveying it. If anything, I'd keep it ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Petra

    Hello! Okay, let me be honest here... Wow. I surely wasn't expecting that when I read "Petra" as a title. I think you have a very good flow of words. ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: De Frog Wizard

    Hello! Well, I'll be honest with you. I actually enjoyed reading this poem. Yes, it did not really make that much sense to me but it surely is out of ...

    Feb 14, 2013


“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince