Hellooo racket!
You had me a vignette. Absolutely adore these.
Alright, next, wow. This is truly remarkable. It was just beautiful. Nothing has made me think so much in so long.
I didn't see any problems with it honestly.
But I loved how you were able to write like it was the character talking, so casual, yet so formal. Not everyone can do this without it sounding super cheesy, but you did it. And amazingly, if I might add.
Hopefully, you see this and you can check out my writing if you fancy.
Please, please, please never stop writing,
MK
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