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welcome to yws! i loved it your poem. to me, the most powerful line of a piece of work can be the last, and your final line was great. keep ...

**For this review, I am going to break every four lines into stanzas so it can be read more easily. I suggest doing this whenever writing a poem. I really ...

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Yes, this is going to be a review... To begin, I will take to notice that you classified this into "poetry" although it is a piece written in paragraphs and ...

This poem was wrote back in the day. But I'm here now and I need my say. So, the flow of the poem was a teensy weensy bit choppish. You ...

I know, but I'm such a hard worker, I decided to type it... no, I'm just stupid

I would have capitalized 'piece' in the title. Although I think this is a tease, I would have liked to see some description of the man. I will praise you, ...

I really liked the flow and rhythm, but what really stood out was the emotion and figurative language. 'cookie cutter houses on cookie cutter sheets' was so pleasant on the ...