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Hey Matt. So clearly this is based off of the song marmalade mentioned. And it's really awesome that you were inspired by it, but looking at the lyrics of the ...

Hey Wannabe, Waffle here for a very story review. This poem touches on some very serious topics, so please excuse my ignorance. I don't have much to say about this ...

Hi there Bm, Waffle here for a review. So I'm gonna start by saying I'm really intrigued by the concept. Now on with the review. It's a fairly short poem, ...

Hi Rosy, Waff here. :) This is a fairly interesting story you have going here, but there's some room for improvement, and I'm hoping I can help you out with ...

Hey there I would like to start by saying that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Very poetic, descriptive, interesting. All the good things that you look for in a ...

Hey Kourt. There really isn't anything I want to critique because this was a very opinionated piece, but I just wanted to say thanks. This really touched me and other ...

Hey Matt. So I feel like reviewing today... I like this one, but I just wanted to point out a few things. The first bit really isn't bad, nothing seems ...

Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. I am not entirely sure if you need to be THAT caucious with the material you are working with, and like you said, ...

Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. I think that this was really short and sweet. It has the right amount of words in each line, It has that feeling ...

That is pretty deep, at the end there. What a creative idea! (ps I am totally going to try this!) You used very commonly-used descriptive words. They way you seperated ...