amelie

daaang iiiiiit okay. My facial expressions softened whenever I saw the short blonde girl standing there. imagery here is pretty bland. so what does this dude see other than blondie? ...

okaaaay I'm gonna try my best and be clear with you. first off, I'm absolutely in love with this poem. because we've come to expect very well-done imagery and a ...

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the thing that sticks out to me mostly is vagueness. so along with the imagery, which i quite like in most areas, it feels like you kind of go through ...

Mem; my love, my burrito, my one and only. I love how this time it seems like less of a rant, which is an improvemeeennntt which is gooooodd! But the ...

This caught my eye for obvious reasons, my name being Amelie Rose. And I cannot begin to tell you how many times people have called me Amelia Rose before. Anyways, ...

I love this. Not entirely, and I'll get to that later, but this is probably the best imagery I've ever seen in a poem that rhymes while still keeping the ...

Hey there. Came across this in the green room and decided I'd check it out and help where I can. Another year passed and I carry on through. I broke ...

I think the main issue I'm having with this is how dull it is. It's an interesting idea, and I think I like the concept. But it doesn't give me ...

clicking on this, there was this little voice in my head that kept saying "welcome to hell!" (Perhaps it was god trying to scare me straight. Literally.) And quite honestly ...

this lacks originality. not in the sense that EVERYTHING needs to be completely brand new and 'never seen before!' but I'd appreciate a less common construct. And my view on ...

Hey there! We spoke earlier about this, but now that I see the whole story I'd like to elaborate on the critiquing bit. Like I mentioned before, just as a ...

Hi there! A gigantic, black, round chamber filled with mirrors. Here's a bit wordy, and also a bit of a dull start to the story. Your main issue here is ...

Good imagery - too wordy. This is something that I personally had to learn very recently, and it's that jamming something so tiny with tons of huge words is so ...

Hellooo I'm having trouble knowing how to interoperate this poem, so I'll break it down a bit and try my best to be clear and honest with you. In my ...