alpacaboss

Hello! A quick review from me :) First impression: When I first read this, I can see the tension between the narrator and the girl, who became the person he ...

Hello! I see this is a continuation of your delightful story. Will be making up my review as I read so pardon if my grammar will be off. Well, that’s ...

Good day/afternoon/night! I'm here to leave a quick review :D First Impression: It's quite an unexpected ending to the mood you set to the story. You used childish, innocent language ...

Hello! I really love this piece of work. I believe this is based off your mom? (It says 'for my beautiful mom') I just want to applaud how she pushed ...

Good morning/afternoon/evening! Here to leave a quick review Mini Review: I like how you talked about another hidden aspect of love. A person who has shut themselves from the idea ...

Hello! Just wanted to leave a short review. I really love how encouraging this is. It's not in the usual typical soothing way. It's an aggressive, persuasive, and fiery way ...

Hello! Alpacaboss here :) Thanks for reviewing some of my works by the way. I really appreciate it Random Side Note: Actually, a piece of music came to mind when ...

Hello! Came to leave a quick review. This poem is simple and captivates the audience. Let's dissect it a bit :) Sitting on wet grass bathed in sunlight, wearing bright ...

How do you make poems sound exactly like Early-Modern English so effortlessly? Personally, I find it hard to pull this well from my own experience. But you did it wonderfully! ...

Your poem is short, but full of emotion. All the years of that you had to endure in your own home was summarized in a gut-wrenching, emotion-spilling, and wounded poem. ...

Hello! This is your friendly neighborhood alpaca. Dropped by to leave a quick review. :) Although I don't think I've had a severe case of falling for fictional men (yet), ...

Grief is no laughing matter and you showed grief in a tangible and expressible manner that many would find easy to understand. I have lost someone, a blood relative, and ...

For an interesting and heartfelt poem, I wonder why there aren't more reviews on this. So I might as well leave a review :) The elements of nostalgia, time, and ...

Good morning/afternoon/evening to you! Alpacaboss here :D First Impression: ouch, just ouch, the ending broke my heart. And I was rooting for Oliver :( In terms of reality, this is ...

Wow this is a very impactful poem. Before the review, I just want to make sure you're okay. If this is based of your life experiences, you always have us. ...