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  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: Home of us

    They say that less is more. This is a good example of that. In less than 100 words of poetry, you conveyed complex emotions that one would feel in a ...

    Dec 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Ang aking aso, Hugo (My dog, Hugo) [Filipino poem]

    YOU'RE FILIPINOOOO??? WOOOO AKO RIN! *squealllsss* Sige magtataglish ako sa review nito. Pasensya na kung may grammatical errors ako hehe Ang aking aso, Hugo Siya ay may malaking puso Darating ...

    Dec 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: i try to try

    What a wonderful poem! I really relate so much to this poem. I'll be reviewing it the way I interpret it so pardon me if I make some mistakes the ...

    Dec 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Language of Rain

    The alpaca has awaken from her slumber to feel the drizzle of rain dripping down her face. She saw this work and decided to leave a short review. The overall ...

    Nov 2, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Waterjet Stories

    ALPACA COMING THROUGHHH! *crash* *cat scream* sorry cat Alright! Time for a short review! (actually this is more of appreciation and encouragement post for this beautiful piece of work) The ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: memories you'll never feel again

    Hello! The alpaca was intrigued by the title and dragged me here. Good thing the alpaca has a good sense and I was not disappointed by this work. Far from ...

    Sep 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: "In this moment."

    The initial reason I clicked on this short story to review it was because I remembered a sweet little piece that had the exact same title as this. "In This ...

    Sep 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Our Destined World

    Hello! The alpaca has dropped by to leave a review! 🦙 I'll be giving a short review for this interesting piece. When there's a poem titled "Our Destined World", I ...

    Sep 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Why I cannot Write

    Why can't you write when you've churned out something that is akin to the language of Shakespeare and easily understandable at the same time? If you say your writer's block ...

    Sep 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Down, Deep, Deep Down

    Good day! Came here to review your work and deliver your order of one alpaca magnet set! I apologize for the delay and I hope you are satisfied with your ...

    Aug 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Spiritual Re: ​Keeping your eyes on Jesus/ Tunnel Vision (Essay)

    Hello!! Welcome to YWS! Glad to meet another Christian here who's actively sharing the faith. When I first saw your work in the green room, I immediately became filled with ...

    Jul 28, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Diversion

    Hello Lim! The alpaca has come to give you a review! This is a light-hearted, airy piece, quite reminiscent of the cottage core aesthetic. Let's start the review, but let ...

    Jul 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodbye My First Car

    Awww nooo! That's so sad :( Although I don't have a car yet (this fact betrays my age doesn't it), I understand how much cars can mean to certain people, ...

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: after the storm

    Hello! The alpaca has barged in another Green Room work to give a review! This poem is really pretty from its structure to its rhymes. Let's go review! Also, I'll ...

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I, too, hear America

    Hello! I am not American nor have I read the poem you suggested but I shall review this all the same because why not?! Pardon the alpaca, it has gone ...

    Jul 24, 2023


The true adventurer goes forth aimless and uncalculating to meet and greet unknown fate.
— O. Henry (William Sydney Porter)