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Re: Home of us
They say that less is more. This is a good example of that. In less than 100 words of poetry, you conveyed complex emotions that one would feel in a ...
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Re: Ang aking aso, Hugo (My dog, Hugo) [Filipino poem]
YOU'RE FILIPINOOOO??? WOOOO AKO RIN! *squealllsss* Sige magtataglish ako sa review nito. Pasensya na kung may grammatical errors ako hehe Ang aking aso, Hugo Siya ay may malaking puso Darating ...
Dec 12, 2023 -
Re: i try to try
What a wonderful poem! I really relate so much to this poem. I'll be reviewing it the way I interpret it so pardon me if I make some mistakes the ...
Dec 12, 2023 -
Re: The Language of Rain
The alpaca has awaken from her slumber to feel the drizzle of rain dripping down her face. She saw this work and decided to leave a short review. The overall ...
Nov 2, 2023 -
Re: Waterjet Stories
ALPACA COMING THROUGHHH! *crash* *cat scream* sorry cat Alright! Time for a short review! (actually this is more of appreciation and encouragement post for this beautiful piece of work) The ...
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Re: memories you'll never feel again
Hello! The alpaca was intrigued by the title and dragged me here. Good thing the alpaca has a good sense and I was not disappointed by this work. Far from ...
Sep 2, 2023 -
Re: "In this moment."
The initial reason I clicked on this short story to review it was because I remembered a sweet little piece that had the exact same title as this. "In This ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Our Destined World
Hello! The alpaca has dropped by to leave a review! 🦙 I'll be giving a short review for this interesting piece. When there's a poem titled "Our Destined World", I ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Why I cannot Write
Why can't you write when you've churned out something that is akin to the language of Shakespeare and easily understandable at the same time? If you say your writer's block ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Down, Deep, Deep Down
Good day! Came here to review your work and deliver your order of one alpaca magnet set! I apologize for the delay and I hope you are satisfied with your ...
Aug 16, 2023 -
Re: ​Keeping your eyes on Jesus/ Tunnel Vision (Essay)
Hello!! Welcome to YWS! Glad to meet another Christian here who's actively sharing the faith. When I first saw your work in the green room, I immediately became filled with ...
Jul 28, 2023 -
Re: Diversion
Hello Lim! The alpaca has come to give you a review! This is a light-hearted, airy piece, quite reminiscent of the cottage core aesthetic. Let's start the review, but let ...
Jul 28, 2023 -
Re: Goodbye My First Car
Awww nooo! That's so sad :( Although I don't have a car yet (this fact betrays my age doesn't it), I understand how much cars can mean to certain people, ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: after the storm
Hello! The alpaca has barged in another Green Room work to give a review! This poem is really pretty from its structure to its rhymes. Let's go review! Also, I'll ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: I, too, hear America
Hello! I am not American nor have I read the poem you suggested but I shall review this all the same because why not?! Pardon the alpaca, it has gone ...
Jul 24, 2023
