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Re: Leaf (Chapter Two)
Hey Firedancer here to review your chapter. Sorry if I write anything that offends you, I'm just genuinely trying to help and to share my opinion, because that's what people ...
Mar 31, 2013 - Re: The Year of the Scorpio - Chapter 2 Mar 31, 2013
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Re: One Rainy Day
"She was wearing a bright yellow off shoulder top and a pair of blue shorts. She looked irresistible, her hair tied up into a ponytail the usual style she looked ...
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Re: Sweet as can be!
Hey Firedancer here to review your short story. Sorry if I write anything that offends you, I'm just genuinely trying to help and to share my opinion, because that's what ...
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Re: Maybe I Should Die
Hey Firedancer here to review your short story. Sorry if I write anything that offends you, I'm just genuinely trying to help and to share my opinion, because that's what ...
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Re: Foul Play
Hello I am Firedancer here to do a review of your poetry. Okay so I am not the best puzzle solver and I must admit that I am a tad ...
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Re: The Eclipse of my Skin
Hello I am Firedancer here to do a review of your excellent poem. First of might I say that this is a very descriptive and amazing poem considering on how ...
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Re: Our Dreams -VERY OLD POEM
Hello I am Firedancer here to do a review of your First of might I say that this is a very good topic? I mean I personally really like dreams, ...
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Re: little bird
Hey there earendil, I am going to review your poem and what a lovely little poem it is too. Why I say that out of all that I have stumbled ...
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Re: Dear Lacy (Letter 2)
Hey Firedancer here to review your literary work/letter. "So instead of go through the horrible time growing apart from each other, I cut you off. I didn't reply." I think ...
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Re: 1
Wow! This story is amazing, its fantastic, its phenomenal! It seems to be everything at once and nothing at the exact same time. It has all the glory of a ...
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Re: Story I just started writing
Hey Firedancer here to review your story. "I was standing in a quiet dark lukewarm forest, barefoot, wearing only a bright blue silk dress that fell down to right above ...
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Re: My Frappuccino! (My Coffee Addiction)
Hey Firedancer here and i am going to review your Lyrics. "You’re so tantalizing, Could you be a mocha? Could you be el Tazo? (Tea?) Your foam exci-i-ites me, I ...
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Re: Scenery Idea's
Hey Firedancer here, and i am going to review your scenery writings! I really like the description of the girl in your first scenery actually. I've always been intrigued by ...
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Re: The Elderberry Tree
Hey there Firedancer here to review your work. Its funny how you say that english is your second language and you wrote this poem, because we had a foreign exchange ...
Mar 31, 2013