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Re: the muse loves me
hey hey! ^_^ thoughts [1] this is such an interesting poem because the narrative feels affectionate on the surface, but there is something a little controlling underneath. the narrator keeps ...
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Re: repetitivemonotonous
hey hey! ^_^ YAYYY we love nature poetry! thoughts [1] this is so soft and earthy! the image of mossy fingertips is lovely because it shows how the body is ...
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Re: fleur de lis
hey hey! ^_^ thoughts [1] this is so lush! your writing has this really gorgeous sense of disorientation, like the narrator is trying to describe intimacy after it has already ...
Jun 24, 2026 -
Re: Confusions Chasing For Resolution
hey hey! ^_^ OHHH SO EXISTENTIAL thoughts [1] your poem has a very clear emotional urgency! the narrator feels trapped between confusion, mistrust, loss, identity, survival, and that makes the ...
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Re: Rust on the Roses
hey hey! ^_^ a new day, a new poetry review!! thoughts [1] the atmosphere here is so dramatic and romantic! the poem feels like a letter from someone trapped between ...
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Re: Unsent
hey hey! ^_^ ooo, the title immediately caught our eyes! thoughts [1] the address to mother immediately gives this poem a confessional quality. it feels like the narrator is trying ...
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Re: In the bowels of Hell
hey hey! ^_^ WOAHHH thoughts [1] the poem has a very clear emotional stance, which we appreciate! there is no ambiguity about who the narrator condemns and who the narrator ...
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Re: The Clock
hey hey! ^_^ THIS IS SUCH A GOOD ANXIOUS POEM!! thoughts [1] the central clock metaphor is really strong! the poem captures that awful feeling of making a mistake, apologizing ...
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Re: icarus, wings of coffee
hey hey! ^_^ woah, this is sooo whimsical! thoughts [1] this is so sweet and musical! the poem has a nursery-rhyme quality to it, especially with the repeated phrases like ...
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Re: lazy river
hey hey! ^_^ YAYYY WATER PARK POETRYYY thoughts [1] the concept here is SO interesting! the poem takes something playful and artificial and turns it into something weirdly existential. we ...
Jun 22, 2026 -
Re: cold front//hurricane season
hey hey! ^_^ OH THIS IS SOOOO ATMOSPHERIC thoughts [1] the weather imagery here is gorgeous! the whole poem feels soaked through, and it creates such a cohesive picture. we ...
Jun 22, 2026 -
Re: Father
hey hey! ^_^ we forgot all about this place, but we wanted to review this! thoughts [1] the emotional intensity here is really striking! the poem feels almost feverish, like ...
Jun 22, 2026 -
Re: Mera Apna Ghar
hey hey! ^_^ ANOTHER HINDI SPEAKER OH MY GOSH thoughts [1] we love how you personify the walls of the house! the corners of the wall are something most would ...
Jul 13, 2025 -
Re: ( transformation )
hey hey! ^_^ this caught our eye because we love transformation as a theme! thoughts [1] the first thing we noticed is that this poem has a first-person perspective, but ...
Jul 12, 2025 -
Re: Untitled- 1
hey hey! ^_^ YAY NATURE POETRYYY thoughts [1] the diction here is interesting! it's archaic, but we still think it's easy to navigate - sometimes, all of those words can ...
Jul 9, 2025
