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Re: Broken and Alone
Hi dogsrule5, acm here for a review! I really liked this story, especially with its message. Bullying is such a big problem and so many people --me included-- have been ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: I Am A Mirror
Hi, acm here for a review! I really liked this poem, especially how you used the mirror metaphor. Though they always seem like a symbol of vanity, reflecting your insecurities ...
Feb 29, 2016 -
Re: Queen Of Nothing (no 1 of The Forgotten Soul series)
Hi RadiantShadow, acm here for a review! I really enjoyed reading this poem, and I've always really liked poems that had a bit of rhyming. I really liked the language ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Nightmare
Hi TopHatsUniversal, acm here for a review! To start off, I really like the rhyming. It didn't seem too desperate like some rhymes can get when you try too hard, ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Falling Into Traps
Hi, acm to review! I really liked this poem and how it rhymed. For the most part, everything flowed well and the rhymes fit together without sounding forced. There were ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Autumn's Tale
To start off, I'd like to say that rhyming poems are my favorite, so this one caught my eye. You mentioned in the summary that you didn't know exactly what ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Hiding Within
I can really connect with this. The word choice kept it simple and easy to understand, but not too much like normal prose. Since I didn't find any spelling/grammar errors, ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Time
Hi, acm here for a review! I really liked the topic of the poem. It isn't something that you would normally think about. I just had a few things that ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: I Hate Clocks
To be honest, I felt like something about this poem is off. I just didn't feel it. The subject that you're talking about was very powerful and you could really ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Catalina
I saw this last part in the green room, so I thought I would read the other parts first before reviewing, and I'd just like to say, I loved the ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Never Forget You
Great poem! This is a very meaningful subject, and I could really understand the theme and message. It was very sad, especially at the end when she never got her ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Happy
I really like this poem. It had really good imagery in it, and it started and ended in a strong way. Sometimes poems end with boring or cliche lines, but ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Sky Is Dead
I really liked this. The imagery was nice, and I loved the part where you talked about the moon being red. I feel like red is a daunting, almost evil ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: That Purposeful Rug
Great poem! There are a lot of things that we take for granted in life, and I think that this poem puts it perfectly. The descriptions were amazing in my ...
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: Be Still
I really liked this poem. I think it conveys a message that's on a lot of people's minds, especially now with global warming and people wasting so much of our ...
Oct 13, 2015
