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Hi :] I really liked the way you described the moment and the importance of graduation so simply. It was short and sweet. I mean, graduation is a huge thing ...

Hey hockeyfan :] So, after reading the first paragraph or so of your story, I realized some pretty cool things. 1. The name of the girl happens to be the ...

First of all, you should probably organize this poem into stanzas because it looks a bit messy right now. Unless, of course, you are trying to relate the messiness of ...

Hey Solv :] I haven't read the first two chapters but I still thought this was cute! Comments/Corrections are in red ... On my way home from school, I was ...

Hii Hero :] Wow, you're poem is prettyy....well, until the "devil" comes in, but that part's cool too :] Okay. Comments/Corrections are in bold . I can see this crystal ...

Hi there! I loved the last line of your poem. Very eerie and darkish. Just a couple tiny things... (Corrections/Comments are in bold ) Tell me one thing I don't ...

Hi Scien :] Im wondering, is your username short for science? Anyways, it sounds cool. Alright, about your poem: (Corrections/comments in bold) Shabby clothes meander along the concrete jungle's river

Hi Anne! Cute story, but you're right. It needs more detail. It seemed to me like you took something that could've spanned over a few chapters and squashed into a ...

Hi Brooklyn! This is really cute and it made me smile. :] Just a couple of errors... A juvinile game of seek and find. Juvinile, yes, Spelling error! It is ...

Hey Kitro :] Your poem is a very pretty and I loved the way you added in the air, the stars, and the breeze. My favorite line: Dim the lights ...

Hi Sakura:] My name's Ace. I must say, your poem was a little vague. Don't get me wrong, I liked the flow and the rhythm of it, but I think ...

Aww, what a cute poem! The person you wrote it for is very lucky. :] I don't have that many things to say so I'll keep it short. By the ...

Hey inkmind! You've got a pretty good story coming along but you've got to watch out for punctuation mistakes. Comments/suggestions are in bold. :] "Please lock your doors and windows. ...

Hey there :] I really liked this! The characters were described beautifully. I loved the mystery and darkness in it. The only things I found were: Nobody would ever would. ...

Hello :] I'm Ace and I'm a total sucker for ghost stories so I loved this one. It reminded me a lot of the movie "The Corpse Bride". (Tim Burton ...