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Re: Tuesday.
Hello, RandomLady33! I’m here to review this lovely poem of yours! Now, I’m not great with understanding poetry, but I’ll give you my interpretation. Forgive me if it’s not what ...
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Re: God's given gift- A Mother 🤰🤱
Hello, Alwaysea! This isn’t a story so I’m not really going to leave a review, but I will agree with your sentiment! I’m so grateful for my mom giving up ...
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Re: The Soldiers : The Old Guard (2/3)
Hi, Rookie! I loved the first poem in this trilogy, so I decided to read and review this one as well. I was not disappointed! Did I mention that I ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: The Soldiers : Napoleon of the West (1/3)
Hi, Rookie! I love your poem. The poetic imagery and structure is very free and loose like the west itself. I also like your characterization of the speaker as a ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: A love so beautiful that it feels like torture
Wow! I don't usually read and review longer pieces of writing on here, but your title drew me in. And I can see why your name is Vampricone6783! I loved ...
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Re: The Solution to Fix the Education System
Hi, Cat_15! Awesome essay! This gives me huge "A Modest Proposal" vibes (although the subject matter is highly different). I love satire in general, but as a student, this piece ...
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Re: Teratophilia Nina
Hi, Vampricone6783! Creepy poem! I must admit, I don't know the series this is a fanfic of, so hopefully I didn't miss anything in the poem. I like the stark ...
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Re: Rise up once again, Glorious Country!
Hi, Rookie! I think this is the second poem of yours I'm reviewing, and I love your work! I want to say that I adore the line "We will arise ...
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Re: the ghost town
Hello, calientexcoli! I like this story, with the premise of a young person (I assume) being trapped in the ghost town. My guess is that she becomes a ghost as ...
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Re: gifted child, great student, good son
Hi, Eulogy! Awesome poem! This really encapsulates the "gifted kid" experience. Your entire poem, in my opinion, flows really well, but I especially adore the connections between parts i and ...
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Re: Would it kill to be nice?
Hi, Rookie! I love this poem! The contrast between what the speaker does and says reminds me of any modern politician (I'm not sure if you meant it that way, ...
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Re: Drink Straight Lemon Juice
Awesome poem! I'm not great at interpreting poetry so forgive me if this is a totally botched extrapolation, but I took this to mean so many people love who we ...
May 22, 2025
