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Hello there, Forest! Oooo... I love all T-Swift's songs by the way! That was funny! :lol: Anyway, when you make a parody please be sure to have the proper beat ...

Hello there, Sarebear! I find this interesting and a touching poem. I liked the flow of this poem especially from the first stanza. The way you portrayed those glass shattering ...

Hello there! First of all, this is really an "absurd" story(really similar to your title), made me laugh out of its funny plot. :lol: However, I could see a lot ...

Hello there, Arah! An interesting poem to read. I am a mermaid kicking The surface I liked this line. It's a good way of having a metaphoric line. :wink: Did ...

Hello there, Classy! I totally love your story. Though it didn't bring me to tears but it was kind of a sad touching story :smt022 . I love how you ...

Hello there, Allmixedup! I liked this. The way you expressed "Silent scream" is very unique and kind of showing the dark side and slightly emotional. I'm thinking this could be ...

Hello there, Poet! This is an interesting piece and I must say I really liked this. :smt003 At first, I didn't get this poem because there were some words or ...

Hello there, Jane! First of all, I really liked this piece. It had a good flow. It was some kind of a dark story for me. Really liked the last ...

Hello there, Smash! This is an interesting story. It had a good flow. A kind of story every teenage girls can relate to. One thing: I too agree with Bondgirl. ...

Hello there! This is an interesting poem. I really liked this. At first, I didn't get it much until I read it again and looked at those reviews above me. ...

Hello there! Meatloaf... Meatloaf... I must say that I'm very impressed and amused on this kind of poem you have. The rhyming was good. It had a good flow. There ...

Hello there, Arby! First of all, welcome to YWS. It seems that you're a new member here, if I'm right. :D I like your unique style of writing this poem. ...

Hello there, King! Interesting. Even though there was no presence of rhyming scheme, it was totally good. I liked the way you started and finished it. I never expected the ...

Hello there, Scarlette! Your story was quite kind of funny actually. Derrick and his friends thought that Amber got PMS.lol. Also, I liked your unique way of titling the story. ...

Hello there, Isha! I liked your story. It was sad, but really good. Liked the good start of your story. One thing that really made me confused was when Mark ...