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Yourmysterygirl

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: What If..

    I really like your poem it made me think of a better world but the part that I liked the most was when you wrote "what if no one was ...

    Sat May 11, 2013 8:36 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wanting

    I loved the beginning but i didnt understand the ending it confused me. Anyways I love how you started because i cant relate to that " I want to know ...

    Sat Apr 20, 2013 3:13 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The voice

    I like the middle of this poem it was deep and i just really liked it mostly when it says "You know the best thing is to cry, but you ...

    Sat Apr 20, 2013 3:05 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breaking the Wall

    This is amazing. Your poem is so strong and powerful it talks not just to me but to my friends that have been through at lot. My favorite part was ...

    Sat Apr 20, 2013 2:50 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Sight

    Every time i cry this happens I really enjoyed the part when you wrote " The image goes from your eyes to your heart and makes you feel it Feel ...

    Sat Apr 20, 2013 2:44 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Running Away From This Life

    This poem describes the situation i am in mostly the part that says " I want to tell him, Its me or her, choose wisely. But I am not sure ...

    Fri Apr 19, 2013 7:28 pm
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: I Wish This Was A Goodbye

    I hate goodbyes too mostly when its someone i care about or love. It hurts so much but is sometimes the best thing to do. I love the ending where ...

    Fri Apr 19, 2013 7:09 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Your Attention

    I have felt like this before like my life was no longer worth living and everything i did wasn't good enough for my mother. My favorite part of you poem ...

    Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:55 pm
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Don't Give Up On Yourself.

    I really enjoyed reading this. It made me think about what i want to be and what i once wanted. Your words spoke to me and made me realize that ...

    Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:47 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Unknown

    This poem is short but it says a lot. It made me think of my past love and my past experiences. You did a really good job. I don't know ...

    Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:39 pm


"While we may come from different places and speak in different tongues, our hearts beat as one."
— Albus Dumbledore