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Re: Your Undoing
Hey there, Rubes here with a review. (First of all, please just know that I am in Year 8 (13 years old) so some of this feedback may be irrelevant ...
Jul 10, 2021 -
Re: When I tell you, "It's alright."
heya rubes here with a quick review :) It’s hard; Things aren’t easy. I like this, simple but effective. It calmly introduces the topic of sadness and feeling hopeless. I ...
Jul 4, 2021 -
Re: One Day
Heya Rubes here with a quick review! First impressions: WOAW! I love the short length combined with the language, it just all works great. I feel that the short structure ...
Jul 4, 2021 -
Re: Who Do I cry for?
Heya, Ruby here with a review! Why do I cry? Why am I shy? Awesome start, I love the questioning as you begin the poem. It gives a small insight ...
Jun 20, 2021 -
Re: Flowers
Heya, just a short review for a short piece! Flowers, swaying in the breeze I love how you set the scene by introducing the flowers and the way in which ...
Jun 17, 2021 -
Re: What really goes on inside my head.
Heya, your sis here with a review! 1st impressions: Right so the description is so beautiful and very fluent. No parts seem cut off or too long and perfectly suit ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: Rainy Day
Heya, Rubes here with a review! 1st impressions: Wow! I love the language and story line combined to create such a beautiful poem. I love the fact that every stanza ...
Jun 7, 2021 -
Re: Do You Remember?
Heya, Ruby here with a short review! 1st impressions: This really is beautiful ; the reader can emotionally connect with you in the poem which I love a lot. It ...
Jun 5, 2021 -
Re: you are a writer
Heya, Ruby here with a review. 1st Impressions: Even reading through this only once this hits really hard, especially as I tend to think of he future and past quite ...
Jun 5, 2021 -
Re: Ugly Feelings
Heya, Rubes here with a review! WWW: I am in love...I couldn't have described it much better than you did. You feel nothing but don't feel 'numb' exactly. You feel ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: how many bruises can you hold inside you
Heya, Ruby here with a review! WWW: I love the actual theme of the poem. It brings the reader to properly engage with the writing and makes them question how ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: Just Understand
heya, rubes here with a review! WWW: I love the structure, it is quick paced and almost demonstrates the speed of a panic attack or thought process in your episodes. ...
Jun 2, 2021 -
Re: Mature
Heya, Rubes here with a (hopefully) short review. First of all, I would love to say that your style is so charming ; I wanted to read forever because of ...
Jun 2, 2021 -
Re: Little boy Mello
Heya, Rubes here with a lil' review! "There was a little boy Mello, A jolly good fellow. He couldn’t afford a piano or cello, So he whistled his tunes away." ...
May 17, 2021 -
Re: no recovery
Heya, Rubes here for a review! I like the first line that sets the scene, it leads to greater imagery and creates an overall down mood of the poem. The ...
May 13, 2021