Yanni1995

It's almost perfect except for these mistakes: for I'm a vegitarion. - it's vegetarian. Now I'll tidie up, and head off to school. - it's tidy. That's all... Hope it ...

I love it! It's full of emotions and I could almost feel the anger and betrayal radiate from your words. Some nit-picks though. Do you know how it feels To ...

I love it because I can totally relate to it. But, somehow I feel like the rhyme in the first stanza is a little forced and the flow in the ...

I believe you when you say that you wrote this because you were annoyed. It was shown clearly with your words. Nice grammar as well. You're right, it is amusing. ...

I love, love, love it... although, I really don't know how you can feel this way... *ahem* Anyway, I like it a lot because it is very meaningful and there ...

Doxie!! I love, love, love it! Especially because I know that you actually feel like this. It was beautifully done. But I want you to know that there will be ...

This was very emotional. I loved it and I myself am against abortion so I liked the way you focused on it. Needless to say, when my father found out ...

This is a beautiful piece. The simplicity added to its brilliance and it's very easy to understand. I've got a few mistakes I'd like to point out though. As i ...

This is a good piece. I've got some things to point out though. The water all around me was slashing into my face making it hard for me to see ...

I love, love, love it. I like the way you wrote it, the direct and straight-to-the-point beginning and then the sudden twist of the plot at the end. The suspense ...

This feels so real that I'm left wondering if this is fiction or an actual life story. It's really good, I just have some things to point out. Did you ...

This is a really lovely poem. It expresses so many things all at once and it also says things that only happen to certain people but are never pretty pictures. ...

This is very beautiful albeit in a painful way. Believe me when I tell you that girl you're not alone. This was really good and somehow I can relate to ...

Hey Doxie!! So, let me start off by saying that this poem is really emotional and I love the way you wrote it but there are some mistakes that I ...

This was so sad. It was sadly beautiful. There was a lot of emotion in your writing and I could literally feel everything that you were, probably, feeling while you ...