XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

Greetings, This was a wonderful story. First kiss, first love, and all the anxiety that goes along with it. You crafted this story very well and your characters are full ...

Greetings, I must say that for a diary of a newlywed wife, it seems to lack a certain amount of emotion in it, like what the previous reviewers have said. ...

I'm not really sure what to make of this story. It seems to have several different elements to it that could be the theme but there isn't one nailed down. ...

I have to say that this is an amazing story about forgiveness and friendship. At least that is the theme I found in it. A girl who has lost everything ...

You beat me to the punch. I have always thought about what it would be like if the world that we create within our stories was an actual world with ...

After reading the first story and comparing the characters in this new section, I would have to say that I see Connor and Macy being a better match than Parker ...

This was a cute story. And possibly the beginning of a pet name. I like the dynamics between the two characters. The best friends that try to hide small secrets ...

You would be a great motivational speaker. I can't say that I understand the fear of being "normal". The thing I fear is "never trying", which is difficult to explain. ...

Seriously! What is with you and the heavy hitting stories about the world of us writers!? I want you to know that this isn't a criticism. This story is amazing. ...

This is an amazing sequel to "I'm a writer, sir". I may not completely agree with what is in this story, but I respect that it is a view point ...

This is an interesting idea though I must say a slightly frustrating one. I realize that the mystery of why these two are connected on a subtle level is part ...

This story was very well written. Your descriptions and attention to details are perfect. The way that you draw the reader in using a young woman's desire to remain as ...

Greetings, You have the makings of a good beginning here. Or a middle, I can't really tell which. The truth is that I can't tell if this is the start ...

I'm not sure why you put such a disclaimer on this story. It was beautiful. I don't see these ideas as cliche's. I see this as a girl trying to ...

Wow. That was an amazing story about determination and the will to keep pursuing a dream that everyone is telling you to give up on. I like how the majority ...