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Greetings! In your first line "...Gracie's mother weeped..." I think that the proper spelling of that is "wept". You also have a run on sentence at "My name is Gracie ...

Greetings, I have to say that I really did enjoy this story. Trying to express the feelings of someone that is being completely repressed of who they are because those ...

Greetings, This short story is very choppy. It almost seems breathless, like a run on sentence. A lot happens in just a few paragraphs. There is really no time to ...

Greetings, This is really good. It seems like a good start to an entire story of adventure and magic. I have a few things that I want to point out. ...

Well I am not sure what I read but I am going to give you a review anyways. First off, typos man...typos. I was so distracted by the typos that ...

Greetings, I have to say that you have expertly crafted this scene. The imagery is quite refined and you address a great deal of the inner turmoil of the character ...

This is a very interesting idea that you have told us. That a bishop, at first, is upset with the current state of things as he no longer has power ...

I have to say that your use of descriptions is very good, quite vivid in their execution. I can really get the feeling of being in the tunnel and the ...

Thank you for this story. Though I do not claim a religion, I do believe in God and his love for us. I was happy to see that this story ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, I have to say, since I personally know someone who has thought some of these very same things, that this is very accurate to the way ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, This poem strikes a very strong nerve that is a very big topic in our society right now. I appreciate how you are showing people the ...

Greetings writer and a good tomorrow. I always begin with a compliment of the work. You have a gift of description and you paint a picture in the most amazing ...

Greetings This was an amazing story. The continual return to the coins is fantastic. And the way that you captured the mindset of a young child is perfect. I have ...

Wow...That was really something, to say the least. The story itself is very strong. The idea of someone taking revenge on the people that took from them everything they held ...

Wow. That was powerful. I have to say that you have painted the feelings of excitement and loss very well in this story. The way that she spends her time ...