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Greetings, I am guessing that this is more of a free form poem. I actually spent a few minutes trying to find the rhyme and rhythm to it. If I ...

Greetings, This was a really nice story. Something that is about something so simple as being able to do something nice for someone. The interactions between these two characters is ...

Greetings, As a parent( and a husband of a wife that worries a little too much) I know exactly the feeling that these parents are feeling. I have to admit, ...

Greetings, Having formerly been a Correctional Officer, I resonate with this idea more than you know. Taking an old idea like this and throwing a new twist on it is ...

Greetings, I have to say that I have a hard time seeing what the story is actually about. You had me in the first paragraph. It was beautifully written and ...

Greetings, This was an interesting piece. I can't really put my finger on what it is really about. Is it about being alone? or is it about someone not wanting ...

Greetings, I want to applaud you for addressing an issue that has been plaguing the modern world. The idea that a person's self worth has been placed on something that ...

Greetings, Wow. You have the beginnings of an amazing story here. This may just be a short story for you, but I would encourage you to push this farther. There ...

Greetings, I have to say that I really like this story. As a husband that has a wife that is constantly stressed, I know just how this husband feels. Trying ...

Greetings, This has a very H.P. Lovecraft vibe going for it. It plays on the fear of the unknown, at least in the beginning. You gift for description is amazing. ...

Greetings, This is an incredible story. I hadn't been expecting that ending with the story that you had crafted here. My hats off to you. I have to say that ...

Greetings, An inspired piece. One of pain and heartache from someone that has been hurt by another's lies. I don't know a single person that hasn't felt this same feeling ...

Greetings, I really like this poem. It speaks to a wonder in all of us how something that isn't alive can have such spirit in it. It almost seems to ...

Greetings, I have to say that I very much enjoyed your story. Your descriptions are very well rounded. Giving enough for a wonderful picture but not so much so that ...

Greetings! I really enjoyed this story. Your descriptions are phenomenal and your flow is perfect. It seems like a great beginning to a much larger story. I can't say that ...