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Re: Closet Case
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Here we Go! This is petty short, so it'll be fast. Mom , I'm sorry. I shut my the ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Puppet Master
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Puppet Master Hungry with revenge, I bite my tongue. ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Demons ~ Ch.1
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Other are in blue . I was raised to be a top-dog. I was ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted song 2
Lord have mercy... this is severe .... Maybe you should talk to someone about these sorts of feelings ( no joke). *runs away* ( I agree with the notion that ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: God Loves You
GAAAAAH! God loves you-- Enough to catch you when you fall Enough to discipline you when you're wrong Enough to test you to make you strong And enough to break ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: War
Dude, this is really deep. I liked it... Most epic beginning ever... Everyday is a battle, Every night a victory, Every breath a bullet, Every step a bomb. Very nice. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: you got one more chase
What???? Please... Explain it further. you got one more chanse cause baby i cant take it anymore and i mean it cause baby baby i mean it i mean it ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Ducks
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today... Ducks, ducks Everywhere. Ducks, ducks They hate to share. I wish I were a duck. Maybe I'd get some ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: End
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Here we go! What will happen when it all comes to an end? What will happen when the sky ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless Chapter One (In progress)
Hello!I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Comments are in lavender . Here we Go! As November ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer today! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This poem is cute. The idea is cute, and the concept it cute. The execution.. not so much... You ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: *deleted*
I have, therefore by posting this comment, acknowledge and signify the reservation or my reviewing space. My child, you have been blessed. Let no one tell you otherwise.... (Just kidding.) ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Rock. Paper. Scissors.
Quick Input - This is nice, it's Interesting and captivating- and you held a constant theme. That's an admirable trait. *claps* My only input it would seem, is that you ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Chandler Alex Thomas
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer today! Now this is short and sweet, and so shall be that of my review. We ride, Hahaha! *gallops* ------------- Wow.. ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Poverty
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Comments are in blue . Thank you for not mentioning the "starving Children in Africa". That get's old, and ...
Jun 1, 2011
