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Re: “Happy New Year!” she shouts
Wow! Such an imagery you have. The title of the poem attracted me at first place. The vocabs were strong, it divulged the cruelty of that lady. This is a ...
May 30, 2018 -
Re: She’d seemed divine: Genre Villanelle
As always there it is, an awesome work of yours. I exactly felt the happy words, when you started describing her in her wedding dress. I could actually picture her ...
May 30, 2018 -
Re: Hopes...Or Not
Hey, I just loved the way you have written this script. You have great knack for writing. It's creative that you have mentioned the days and the number of girls ...
May 29, 2018 -
Re: Phoenix
WOW, This poem is amazing. I totally agree with you withese lines: "Darkness fails to strive without a host to feed on. It is a parasite, leeching off the light ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: A New Light- Over veiw
Hey! I just loved this piece, You got me hooked at the very beginning. These following words: "Knowledge is that the most powerful weapon that she holds that she must ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear Chapter 2
Heyy! I loved this one. And Messia's character evenmore. This piece gave me theatrical effect. These lines below especially, awesome imagination: "His skin was the perfect color—the half-white, half
May 27, 2018 -
Re: He Will Not Grow Weary
This story is awesome! The very first line hooked me to read further. These lines: "The night had fallen so abruptly, with dark clouds veiling the earth beneath my feet. ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Beautiful Soul
This was a motivating poem, it was as if speaking to every reader's soul. I just loved these following lines: "That wild streak in your heart is as sharp as ...
May 26, 2018 -
Re: colorful notes
Wow, this is an amazing poem. You started with a question, it does intrigued me in reading more. To your question: Oh, yeah! It does encompass our soul. The poetic ...
May 26, 2018 -
Re: All I Hear is Cheering
Wow, it is one theatrical piece. I could totally picture the girl in this poem. Infact, these following lines brought back the memories of my childhood days. "My breath catches ...
May 26, 2018 -
Re: I’m weeping: written in iambic, pentameter couplets.
oh my god!! this was a great poem,exactly how one feels when they are betrayed. There was a power in each and every word.The rhyme-scheme was awesome. When the lines ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: End as we know it. Genre: Flash Fiction. Approx 150 words
Oh my god! You have made this piece way more imaginative. This story could totally relate to the feeling one gets when near to death. The vocabs were strong that ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: Don't Do Me Any Favors! Genre : Drabble 100 words.
I liked the story, where helping the dog created an ironical effect on it. You have your own style when it comes to narration. The idea of the story was ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: That Tuesday afternoon
It was a good read. I enjoyed the way take the from the start to the end, it was smooth. The theme was enjoyable and the sarcastic words used made ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: You Can't Hold Me Back
This was an awesome read. The way you have structured the questions made me to read further, the poem showed great prominence in stressing the factors that hinder the speaker ...
May 25, 2018
