Beautiful Soul

This was a motivating poem, it was as if speaking to every reader's soul. I just loved these following lines:

"That wild streak in your heart is as sharp

as a blade that can never be broken,

as fierce and as strong as the wind that

played in your gorgeous hair today.

Sometimes you might feel like you will fall apart,

but I know that you have a brave and rebellious heart"

And when you gave the line "Remember, remember though, It was uttered with intentional care .

You have mentioned life can be bitter sometimes but you don't take it's call. You never give up and you know the soul is out there strong. I felt the confidence in the voice of this poem.

These last lines gave the punch:

"If anyone can do anything it's you.

Anything at all that you set your dreams upon, you can."

I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem. I felt motivated

This is incredible.

That was really good and clean!
I loved what you wrote and really enjoyed my read. I liked how you used all those words to add a dramatic and impactful effect to it. The description of the person portrayed here was exceptional.
The construction was good and well thought of.
"There is still a wild streak within you though,

something raw and untameable.

That wild streak in your heart is as sharp

as a blade that can never be broken,"
These were my favorite lines from your amazing piece of poetry.

*SUGGESTIONS*-
As the description said, the poem doesn't quite seem to clarify, for whom is it written. It is clear that it was for a friend/relative but not sure whom. I suggest if it was for a beloved then add some more lines to make it concrete that it was for them. For example, adding lines that glorify their beauty, etc.

Overall, I think it was amazing and as always -
Great work!