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Hey! :) They found her face down in the water, peaceful as can be, but none the less, I found a dress as black as black can be. You use ...

Hey! I haven't read anything of yours for a while; I'm looking forwards to this. :) The stairs creak, complaining loudly as I step up the narrow staircase. Hmmm ... ...

Hey! Well, seems like you've already received quite a bit of feedback on this piece. *sigh* But I'll try my best ... The bright light of the day began to ...

Hey. It appears that several in-depth grammar critiques have already been posted, so I'm not gonna bother with this. Suffice to say that unfortunately, your grammar needs a lot of ...

Hey! This is kind of really short ... not much to review. Grammar is quite good; I only noticed a few things: Believe it or not they still have meetings ...

Hey Zills! :D The air is cool here – cooler than the others – and the pressing whine of machinery a bit louder. Others? What others? Other rooms? Hospitals? But ...

I do agree with the previous reviewers that you do a lot more showing than telling. I think this is an okay poem, but it could benefit from a lot ...

Hey dragnet. This is a bit of a short post, but I'll do what I can. The sound of a constant annoying beeping sound awoke her. Beep...beep... beep... The beeping ...

Hey! Okay. This isn't my best book ever. Kind to think of it, I never wrote a good book. Ah well... Romonin chronicles Prologue The moon was full. Kind of ...

Hey! :D You've got a great start here. I really like the way you write; it's neat and pretty but it still manages to be intriguing. 1. Does this make ...

Hey! :) Okay, so there's a lot of stories out there about vampires nowadays ... this is clichéd, just for being about vampires, I think. It seems more like a ...

I really like this poem, especially the first part -- so true. (One of the first thing I'm learning at junior high. Seriously. Everyone talks about sex.) The slight, almost ...

Hey Pork! It's been a while since I've read anything of yours, and the title of this piece caught my attention right away. ;) Hazards were many: that man's sole ...

Why hello, Gwening! Good to see you back on YWS. ^^ First thing I noticed... ... is that you stole my title. Ah well, we'll sort it out at swordplay ...

Hey Gwening! :D I'm going to do a super-long review for this. Prepare yourself. :twisted: I. GRAMMAR Very important, this.