WinnyWriter

Hello! Great change of paths here! I'm still anxious to hear of Miranda finding out what "deal" Hayden got involved in, but in the meantime, this change of scenery gives ...

This is deep, and I love the structure. It's a beautiful poem about love, and in some respects, I can relate quite well. I really admire how you reinforce the ...

This is a really cute poem. I love how you display simple yet fervent affection. You've also shown both the inside of the narrator's mind, as well as outside happenings. ...

Hey! Interesting work here. I see you've portrayed a contrast between high school/elementary school and college. Your words give the reader something to ponder. In a way, college is a ...

Hello, it's WinnyWriter! This is a cool poem. I can obviously see that the narrator is expressing hidden feelings for a special person. This reflects the ever-common experience of young ...

So glad to see this chapter up! Wow, this is heart-breaking! And yet I am glad that you are addressing this very real issue. I'm anticipating a good resolution in ...

Hey! This is such a unique work, and I found it fascinating! I liked how it kept bringing out, "I am not the person inside my head." That is powerful. ...

Hey, very nice story! It is simple, and though it lacks drama, it is not boring. Sometimes drama is overdone anyway. The basic concept of your story gives the reader ...

Hey! I like the concept of this work you've written! We probably all have to admit we've done this before. Lol :) It is us very relatable. One thing that ...

Hey, it's WinnyWriter! I am glad to see the fourth chapter here. It has turned very sad, and I'm wondering how you're going to reconcile it. I am anticipating the ...

Nice poem! I like how you personified the dark in the first stanza. Also, the way you show a comfort in and appreciation of the dark is a nice contrast ...

Hi, it's WinnyWriter! I hope you enjoyed writing this. I like the concept you've used of a person locked in a small town but having wanderlust in their heart. Let ...

Nice continuation of your first chapter. I'm starting to wonder what the main point of this story is going to be, as I can't see how that many chapters could ...

Greetings! You've started a cute story. People always love to read something with a little romance tied into it. You did a good job showing Hayden's and Miranda's nervousness through ...

This is really fascinating. Once again, great job. Probably the only critiques I have are rather small things. First of all, make sure your verb tense if consistent. Sometimes the ...