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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose

    Hey there! I've seen chapters of this story, so I figured if I wanted to review, I should start at the beginning. I really like how you've kept the characters' ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: My First Friend

    Hey there! Wow, awesome story, awesome writing! It's so full of information and unique perspective. I was very much pulled in by all the informative insight on selective mutism, and ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Honey and Steel

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this short story, and I think you've done a great job! I like how you've set it back in time, giving it a bit more ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: That's Just My Life

    Hello! I'm here to leave a little review. I think this flows pretty nicely, and it is easy to read. It definitely has a songlike structure, rhythm, and flow. It ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

    Hey there! This is a cool poem, and I like the lighthearted feel. I see the deeper meaning, though, and I think you've done excellent at conveying it without directly ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Hey there! I see you're already getting down to business and posting your own works. Good for you! So I'll give a few comments on this poem. I really like ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pearls

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. Your rhyme scheme is well balanced and easy to follow. The poem is short, but does a great job at painting the mental image. ...

    Aug 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No Longer Flowing

    Hey there! This is a lovely poem, and so relatable for passionate writers. I really like how you've depicted writing - through the phrase "the words" - as something alive ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: somedays imaginings

    Hey there! This is really cool, and so beautifully written! I admire the imagery and the thought that went into keeping the content of each stanza consistent with its respective ...

    Jun 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Colour Red

    Hey, there! What a creative piece. I like how you've just jumped right in and explored your topic, expanding the idea of the color red to include so many thought-provoking ...

    Jun 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Cafe

    Hey, there! Dropping by to leave a review. I read this awhile back, and now that I've come across it again, I should write the review I meant to write ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1

    Hey, there! This is a cute and amusing little story. It's clever of you to snatch that bit of insight into the minds of a couple birds and build a ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Night Sky

    Hey, there! This has got some really nice imagery. I like how you start out with the narrator speaking of their love for the night sky, simple and basic, with ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: i didn't love me

    Hey there! What a thought-provoking poem here. It's awesome how you've come up with so much imagery to depict your ideas. You've done well starting with something that feels innocent ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: crushed

    Hey there! Nice formatting for this poem. I like how you've put it on a background image. The rainy scene fits the mood of the poem, especially considering the mention ...

    Jun 23, 2021


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