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Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose
Hey there! I've seen chapters of this story, so I figured if I wanted to review, I should start at the beginning. I really like how you've kept the characters' ...
Aug 13, 2021 -
Re: My First Friend
Hey there! Wow, awesome story, awesome writing! It's so full of information and unique perspective. I was very much pulled in by all the informative insight on selective mutism, and ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: Honey and Steel
Hey there! I enjoyed reading this short story, and I think you've done a great job! I like how you've set it back in time, giving it a bit more ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: That's Just My Life
Hello! I'm here to leave a little review. I think this flows pretty nicely, and it is easy to read. It definitely has a songlike structure, rhythm, and flow. It ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: They told me
Hey there! This is a cool poem, and I like the lighthearted feel. I see the deeper meaning, though, and I think you've done excellent at conveying it without directly ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: Shell
Hey there! I see you're already getting down to business and posting your own works. Good for you! So I'll give a few comments on this poem. I really like ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: Pearls
Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. Your rhyme scheme is well balanced and easy to follow. The poem is short, but does a great job at painting the mental image. ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: No Longer Flowing
Hey there! This is a lovely poem, and so relatable for passionate writers. I really like how you've depicted writing - through the phrase "the words" - as something alive ...
Aug 3, 2021 -
Re: somedays imaginings
Hey there! This is really cool, and so beautifully written! I admire the imagery and the thought that went into keeping the content of each stanza consistent with its respective ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: The Colour Red
Hey, there! What a creative piece. I like how you've just jumped right in and explored your topic, expanding the idea of the color red to include so many thought-provoking ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: The Cafe
Hey, there! Dropping by to leave a review. I read this awhile back, and now that I've come across it again, I should write the review I meant to write ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1
Hey, there! This is a cute and amusing little story. It's clever of you to snatch that bit of insight into the minds of a couple birds and build a ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: The Night Sky
Hey, there! This has got some really nice imagery. I like how you start out with the narrator speaking of their love for the night sky, simple and basic, with ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: i didn't love me
Hey there! What a thought-provoking poem here. It's awesome how you've come up with so much imagery to depict your ideas. You've done well starting with something that feels innocent ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: crushed
Hey there! Nice formatting for this poem. I like how you've put it on a background image. The rainy scene fits the mood of the poem, especially considering the mention ...
Jun 23, 2021
