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Re: Intoxicating
Hello, let me leave a little review! Romantic feelings and other emotions relating to them are very common topics for poetry, so you've taken on a classic here. Your writing ...
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Re: Window of Truth
Hey, there! Let me leave a quick review. :) This is a nicely formatted poem. Everything is neatly laid out and easy to read. There is a noticeable rhyme here, ...
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Re: Cemetery writers
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this short story. Whether or not it is a personal experience you're writing about, it has the distinct nature of being a personal story. The ...
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Re: Observers
Hello! Let me leave a small review here. :) I like the way this poem looks at us as such small beings in our universe. It leans into the awe-inspiring ...
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Re: a--
Hello, let me leave a quick review. I like how this poem reflects both on the narrator and the person being described. The narrator thinks of the other person in ...
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Re: my red is mine
Hey, there! Let me leave a little review. :) The formatting of this is nice and clear. The line breaks keep things easy to read and moving pretty smoothly. You ...
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Re: Nostalgia
Hello, I'm here to leave a review. Let's get right to it! I always like to see rhymed poetry. Kudos to you for putting your effort into creating this kind ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 1
Hey, there! Let me leave a quick review. You set the mood pretty well in this chapter. It has this heavy, glum feeling, and that seems appropriate, as you've evidenced ...
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Re: then i ate breakfast.
Hello! Let me leave a few comments here. :) I think it's interesting when a writer titles a poem but does not directly reference the title in the body of ...
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Re: Threads Of Destiny:Echoes Of The Pendant Book Two-The Raven's Shadow Introduction-Chapter Two
Hello, I'm here to leave a review! It was an interesting idea to start off by giving a brief overview of the characters. It establishes that there are two distinct ...
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Re: A great pianist's hands
Hello! Thanks for sharing this little story. This is a heartwarming tale that really displays the connection between two siblings. The way the narrator seems to have a habit of ...
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Re: A place in this world, I do not possess
Hey, there! Let's get into a review. First off, thanks for sharing this poetic work. One thing I notice is that some poems repeat the title in a line within ...
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Re: Unnoticed Cracks
Hey, it's me again! :) And without further ado, let's get into the review! ;p I like that the body of the poem never actually mentions cracks like the title ...
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Re: Lightning of Color
Hello! Allow me to leave a little review. :) This is an interesting work in the way it uses lightning to make observations about another person. I don't typically find ...
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Re: A Thousand Small Hands, A Thousand Brave Dreams
This is so awesome! I really love it (especially as a Tolkien fan, which, if you know his works and themes, you'll know why). So let me get into a ...
Jul 7, 2025
