WillowPaw1

AMAZING!! :D When I rea the first couple of phrases, I'm just like YES, RHYMING!!! Lots (I'm not sure about lots, but some) poems on here don't have any rhyming. ...

Wow, I love the introduction to your story, explaining how if you cry from your right eye first, it's from pain and the left eye it's joy. Perfect! You made ...

I'm onto my fourth review for this novel! Again, this is getting somewhere, it's getting deeper into the plot and you're adding twists readers didn't expect. You should try explaining ...

Great job! This story is really getting somewhere. The dream explanation was great, and how their leader wouldn't offer any cats to join them? PERFECT! I don't know if you ...

Hi there! First off, I may be able to help you with a title. The chapter/story seems like regret, right? Or death? You can incorporate regret and dead into your ...

Heyy! Thanks for reviewing my story—I'm here to review yours! :D First off, I love the length of your chapters. They aren't too short, so you're not like,"I need more!" ...

I'm not very good at reviewing poems, but I'm trying my hardest. I like how your poem developed, and you used nice vocabulary. A thing a noticed, however, is that ...

Okay, I'm here to review your story! WillowPaw1! That's me! :D I liked your story, but there were a few things that were running through my mind when I was ...

So—here I am, WillowPaw! And I've only read the first book of the warrior series. This is really good! I like your writing style, and you're able to lure the ...

Wow, okay, this was actually really good! Personally, I thought this was a great, short poem you wrote. I don't know about others, but I liked it. One thing? The ...

Okay, I was just looking around for some book to read and I stumbled upon this. I like this because it fills your mind with questions, questions like what you ...

I absolutely love her name! Annabella Fenrandidrr! And her first name and last name sound beautiful together, too. Okay, so your vocabulary is wonderful and I didn't catch any bad ...

This is a VERY nice piece of work! It is intriguing and suspenseful, which of course makes me want to read more of it. If there were any errors, I ...

This is a very interesting poem. ^_^ I don't read poetry much, or write it, so this may not be a very good review. The I's should be capitalized, but ...

This is very nice so far! Okay, to answer your question, you weren't rushing that much. Maybe just a little, but not that much. A thing I noticed is when ...