If this were a sappy love letter
I would start with:
Your eyes are as blue
as the skies above
as I think of you
with words of love.
If this were a traditional love letter
I would start with:
My Dear,
If this were an illicit love letter
I would start with:
Meet me
where we won't be found.
But this is my love letter
and I would start with
calling out your name
so that the whole world could hear it,
if I only
knew it.
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This is great great great great great! I love how you show what you would do if your love letter was different. But what I love most is when you say 'I would call out your name - if only I knew it." That shows that there is a longing to understand more of the person. I love this and I really think you should do more poems! Sorry this review is brief but I need to go!
Wow, okay, this was actually really good!
Personally, I thought this was a great, short poem you wrote. I don't know about others, but I liked it.
One thing? The rhyming! You actually rhymed! Some poems on here lack rhyming, which is sometimes disturbing and distracting.
There line I think I liked the most from this was:
so that the whole world could hear it,
if I only
knew it.
I think you wrote this one nicely, and it just sounds very good, by sad too! And that's good; you want the readers to have feelings, you want them to feel emotional when reading a poem.
Really, I thought this was a splendid poem. I don't read them much, so I don't have much expeirence with reviewing them, but I thought it was fantastic!
Hope I helped! <3
~ WillowPaw1
thanks