WillowPaw1

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Let's start! Nitpicks You will haunt then till the end. I think you meant "them" and till should have a "'" before it, like so: ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Nitpicks Principle Reed is still lacking hair, through he’s taken to wearing one of those nerdy golf caps to hide it. Though, not through. In ...

Hi there! Happy review day! Okay, this topic was so interesting and the introductory sentence really caught my attention and lured me in. - Nitpicks Fumbling amongst our fins and ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! If you tried out poetry, and this is what came out of it, you should feel proud! ^_^ For some odd reason I love poems like ...

Happy Review Day! ;) Here is a short review for your hilarious poem! Wow, okay, I started laughing. I love how this is in "Gollum's" point of view, and his ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Okay, so while I was reading this, I was thinking, "Dude, there is seriously no punctuation..." And what do you know xD Except, I don't ...

Hello again! :) I just read "Dream", and I love your style. Your poems all seem the same (in a good way), but also a whole different topic, wording choice, ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! ^_^ Okay, so yeah. Wow. 0.0 I actually really love this! It seems so simple, yet so complicated at the same time. You know what ...

Hi there! Awh, I love this! I write poems about animals myself, and poems like this lack on YWS! A couple nitpicks: My friend, he is so neat, Since all ...

Guess who it is?! ME! :) Okay, let's start on the review. I found a couple nitpicks.... "Blujay!" Spelled it wrong. Realizing he COULD I think it's be better if ...

Hi! Again, cool formatting. I like how this one takes the form of a water drop. The lack of punctuation and I think the formatting itself makes the flow seem ...

Haii there. :) I love the formatting in this! And I love how it takes the form of a star (sort of), but it's still simple to read. I wish ...

Hi there! :) First off, welcome to YWS. ;) Okay, so I really like this. The mistakes: The waterfall Is coming Along with the pain Slowly falling; The "I" in ...

Hello! Wow, lovely poem you have here. :) Even though I disagree with your point here (I love the stars) you stated nice reasons why, which is important. I'm glad ...

Hello there! First off, I have to say, good job not messing up the syllables. xD For a second I almost thought you did mess up with "worked" and then ...