But Why, Papa?

Hello, here to review!
First of this is very well written especially for your first poem. When I read it I kinda wanted to start crying, cause you can see the conflicting pain between both a biological abusive father and a actually loving father figure. The truth being told the girls heart seems to be in it's own confusing state. We're she is trying to find we're she stands, or even if there is a solid place to stand. In which she is then hoping that by asking each father these questions, the answers they give will eventually and hopefully lead her to a answer that can put her on the solid ground she needs to stand on.
Keep writing and I look forward to more of your work.

This was a very well-written poem. On its own, it already does it job very well. Without being directly stated, it quickly establishes the emotional connection our young lass has with her "Papa" and the problems she has with her actual father. And does it in a way that makes it seem believable. In a way that makes its main character seem human.
But as a first attempt at poetry... I just have to say that it's one of the best first attempts at poetry I've read. It manages to be a heartwarming tale about a very confused girl, a very misguided father and an human stranger.

Hi! Happy Review Day!

If you tried out poetry, and this is what came out of it, you should feel proud! ^_^

For some odd reason I love poems like this: poems that ask a question, either answered or explained through out the whole poem. I don't know why, but I just love them. I guess I like seeing how people think of it, or how they like to answer.

I find it sad how this girl just can't understand why some people love her, and others don't. But it's just life, it's what happens. Some people are born to hate, others to love.

I don't agree with Awsomesauseness, I think this was pretty straightforward and easy to follow. It had its plot, and it was rolled along smoothly. I think it worked out perfectly fine.

All grammar, spelling, and punctuation seemed pretty good to me.

I do hope you continue writing poetry! You're pretty good at it, have self confidence! ^_^

WillowPaw1~

Cool.
Um its good. I didn't understand it though. I tried to figure out what it was about when you put

Why do your large hands
Gently cover mine,
A smile on your face,
While my father’s hands
bring only pain?

would you explain please.
overall I understand that in here you are wondering why he did this.
No spelling errors I can catch or anything grammatically wrong.
I look forward to reading more.