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Re: living tomb (valentine's day is a graveyard)
hey tattered!! i don’t think i’ve reviewed a work in, like, three years, nor did i log in with that intention. yet this work invoked a feeling strong enough that ...
Mar 22, 2023 -
Re: Be?
Hey Andy. This review will be brief. There isn't much of a technical aspect to pick apart, wherein lies my 'critique'. You beg a philosophical question in the title alone, ...
Dec 21, 2020 -
Re: maniac
Hey, pal. First of all, I wish you well. Your poem and accompanying wall post expressed something absent from YWS and the outer world. There isn't bleak enough conversation about ...
Dec 15, 2020 -
Re: Theatre
Hey whatchamacallit! Another theatre kid here, so I'm excited to review this. Poetry about theatre is inherently ironic, so I do find this kind of funny. There are a lot ...
Apr 12, 2020 -
Re: summer tranquility
Hey whatchamacallit. Let's jump into this. pockets of sunlight pool on the path, I will open this up by saying that this poem is full of pretty imagery. Like, really, ...
Apr 10, 2020 -
Re: Your Birthday
Hey Silverquill. I've read a few of your past works on here, so I'm excited to finally review one. I'll be starting off with specifics, then moving on to the ...
Mar 26, 2020 -
Re: Thoughts of Insanity
Hey Lia. Online class is boring, so I have a review for you. I will be discussing specifics then moving onto the poem as a whole, if that's cool. Have ...
Mar 25, 2020 -
Re: My Friends Have Friends
Hey, MeheraulAzim16! I'm going to start with specifics then move onto the poem as a whole, if that's chilling. My friends have friends, And it’s not me, Grammatical problem. "My ...
Feb 27, 2020 -
Re: Vodka
There is nothing I love more than romance poetry and alcoholism. Hey, Thisislegacy. My name is Willard, it's the first Tuesday of the new year, and I have a review ...
Jan 3, 2018 -
Re: A Poem About Grapes and Cheese
Hey, Sheyren. Willard here, it's like, one in the afternoon, and I have a review for you. You wrote a satire poem. satire flies down scans the room "s...sa...suh...suhtire?" "SUHTIRE?! ...
Jul 24, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hey, yo, Snowmonkey9/PearlC10/RubyRed/Sheyren/Alliyah! Willard here, I guess it's a Friday afternoon, and I have a review for you (guys????) Not everything I say is going to be happy or positive. ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: You're Not in Love With Her
Hello, gxldencrxwns! Willard here, this is my first review in over a year, I'll be rusty as hell, and I hope you enjoy it. You probably won't. You most likely ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: The waves of catharsis and saltwater hands pull my body into the ocean
Heyo, Atsiyatsiekaos! Strange here on this wonderful Tuesday and I have a review for you! Alright, so you know my whole schtick with what I say isn't meant to hurt ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Eternal miss
Hey, yo, SadSorrow! Andrew Jackson Strangehad here on this late Friday night and I have a review for you! This is cool for me, because it'll end this review competition ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Grace - An opening paragraph about a character in my new novel suffering with severe anxiety
Hey, yo, YDRyan! Strange Grohl from the Poo Fighters and I have a review for you on this Friday evening! If I offend you, I apologize. Only trying to review ...
Jul 23, 2016
