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Re: Memory is a Life with no Form
Yo, Weymouth here for a review because i'm cool like that :) This is great, I love how each line and each stanza is so short, it grabs the attention ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Dancing
Yo, Weymouth here for a review cause i'm cool like that :) I love this, I like the language, the rhythm, the rhyme scheme, everything! The words you've used to ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: To Dream the Impossible
Yo, Weymouth here to review because i'm just that cool :D I absolutely love this, it is so refreshing to see a positive poem on YWS, 95% of the ones ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: La Galette (Boulangerie)
Yo, Weymouth here for a review, cause i'm cool like that :) This was an interesting poem, i had no idea what it was about until the second stanza, I ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Waking Up (Sucks)
Yo, Weymouth is gonna review this cause i'm cool like that :) This poem is great, I HATE waking up :P I really like how you personify all these objects, ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: But then again, who believes a seal?
Sorry, I literally need 3 points to post O.o soz pour la spam >.< You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome You're Awesome ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Let our Fingers Dance
Wow. This is seriously good! It's not set out as a poem, but i think it's meant to be because there are some seemingly random capitalisations and punctuations. Every line ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: She could almost be beautiful.
I think this is great, like the simplicity, you haven't tried to beat around the bush or go off on a tangent with adjectives. I like the expression "almost be ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Mixed Feelings
I like this a lot, not only because it's just well written generally, but because I can really empathise with the writer (or whoever the "I" is, i'm presuming it's ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
This is really, really good! I love the all the numbers spread throughout, it makes the poem feel kind of regular and brings in a storyline (kind of). I also ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Ocean Eyes and Stars
This is really good, I guess I can really relate to some of this, and i agree with jacelevasco, i really feel sorry for you because I know how much ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: To Nympha, My Rose
Awww, this is so sweet! I love so much about this poem, I can't even find any grammatical mistakes to correct! It has a kind of lyrical feeling to it, ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Vortex
Wow. I really loved this, it's amazingly powerful, and quite blunt in places, which makes the emotion so raw. The rhythm is really good as well, everything moves at kind ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: The Art of Loving
This is way better than anything I could ever write!This is way better than anything I could ever write!This is way better than anything I could ever write!This is way ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Relapse & Recovery
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