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  • Poetry » Politics, Humor Re: Thou art more orange and more awful

    LOL. Trump is a joke and this joke poem captures it perfectly for me. I got tired of people taking Trump seriously in general, except that it seems like somewhat ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: black white black white grey

    This is neat. Reminds me of a somewhat often quoted bit of Nietzsche about "man's growing inwardness" (the usual translation, somewhat odd but understandable). Basically, people taking out their unacc

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: adularesence

    It does seem a bit thrown-together, but I like the imagery a lot, and the theme. Some poems by a single person try to sound thrown-together, and I can't say ...

    Aug 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    At first I thought this was dedicated to those people. It's cool how you got that many people to work together, as anyone who's ever tried to form any kind ...

    Jul 11, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: however magnificently concealed in aaaaaaaalllll the complacent distance of the refrigerator door

    Get off the drugs while you write essays, save them for the poetry. I was surprised that this wasn't a Dada essay given the rest of what you have in ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Other » Technology, Realistic Re: My Phone Died.

    ...But do they dream of electric sheep? I'm not sure how you could get through this all without bringing up Philip K. Dick, although this is largely an argument against ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Saxophone of the Undead

    Frankenstein is the name of the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself. Nosferatu is also capitalized, but then this just needs to be run through autocorrect in ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Expectations

    The whole time I was reading this, I imagined it to the tune of a country song for some reason. I think the message "don't have expectations" is kind of ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: The Stable of my bodhi (began out defectiVe)

    This is definitely literary Dadaism. I rate it 25/&. I didn't think I'd see anything like that on this site but you really did it so cool. Aside from the ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: I Have Heard your Voice

    This is a poem, not a short story. I know this is supposed to be the lyrics to a song or something, but that's still considered poetry and you didn't ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Garden of Night

    I like a lot of the metaphors and imagery in this, but I frankly can't get over thinking that this sounds like Erlkönig, and thus something that the listener shouldn't ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: Because I Never Learned the Name for Books

    It's like the Jabberwocky poem, but dark and mysterious, and manages to really pull it off rather than just trying hard. This seems to be due to the tone and ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: noah's great awakening

    This sounds like one of David Bowie's earlier songs where he writes surrealist poems, often by chopping up phrases and throwing them everywhere and re-arranging them, and then sets them ...

    May 15, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Spiritual Re: Oh, Becky: an application of philosophy to teenage problems

    "Long story short, morality is gross, and that is an understatement." Best line out of context ever. In any case, this is the most confused-sounding thing I have ever read ...

    May 15, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Supernatural, Science Re: The Story Of ​Ghosts and Demons

    "The ouija board goes back to the middle ages where pagans or cults as called today would torture a child until it was almost dead, then cut out his heart ...

    May 9, 2017


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