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Re: Thou art more orange and more awful
LOL. Trump is a joke and this joke poem captures it perfectly for me. I got tired of people taking Trump seriously in general, except that it seems like somewhat ...
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: black white black white grey
This is neat. Reminds me of a somewhat often quoted bit of Nietzsche about "man's growing inwardness" (the usual translation, somewhat odd but understandable). Basically, people taking out their unacc
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: adularesence
It does seem a bit thrown-together, but I like the imagery a lot, and the theme. Some poems by a single person try to sound thrown-together, and I can't say ...
Aug 17, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
At first I thought this was dedicated to those people. It's cool how you got that many people to work together, as anyone who's ever tried to form any kind ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: however magnificently concealed in aaaaaaaalllll the complacent distance of the refrigerator door
Get off the drugs while you write essays, save them for the poetry. I was surprised that this wasn't a Dada essay given the rest of what you have in ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: My Phone Died.
...But do they dream of electric sheep? I'm not sure how you could get through this all without bringing up Philip K. Dick, although this is largely an argument against ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Saxophone of the Undead
Frankenstein is the name of the scientist who created the monster, not the monster itself. Nosferatu is also capitalized, but then this just needs to be run through autocorrect in ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Expectations
The whole time I was reading this, I imagined it to the tune of a country song for some reason. I think the message "don't have expectations" is kind of ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: The Stable of my bodhi (began out defectiVe)
This is definitely literary Dadaism. I rate it 25/&. I didn't think I'd see anything like that on this site but you really did it so cool. Aside from the ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: I Have Heard your Voice
This is a poem, not a short story. I know this is supposed to be the lyrics to a song or something, but that's still considered poetry and you didn't ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Garden of Night
I like a lot of the metaphors and imagery in this, but I frankly can't get over thinking that this sounds like Erlkönig, and thus something that the listener shouldn't ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Because I Never Learned the Name for Books
It's like the Jabberwocky poem, but dark and mysterious, and manages to really pull it off rather than just trying hard. This seems to be due to the tone and ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: noah's great awakening
This sounds like one of David Bowie's earlier songs where he writes surrealist poems, often by chopping up phrases and throwing them everywhere and re-arranging them, and then sets them ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Oh, Becky: an application of philosophy to teenage problems
"Long story short, morality is gross, and that is an understatement." Best line out of context ever. In any case, this is the most confused-sounding thing I have ever read ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: The Story Of Ghosts and Demons
"The ouija board goes back to the middle ages where pagans or cults as called today would torture a child until it was almost dead, then cut out his heart ...
May 9, 2017
