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Re: Town of Richardson (Five more short stories)
Hello, Vampricone! Wist is here to leave a short review for each of your short stories! I thoroughly enjoyed this collection as it allowed me to follow Gabriel's journey and ...
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Re: forwardsbeckonrebound
Hello, foxtails! I'm Wist and I'm here to leave you a short review. Overall, you show good control over imagery. Your metaphors are all clean and your diction paints the ...
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Re: you thought you disappeared when all you had was smoke, but you never stopped burning
Hello, FireEyes! Wist here to review this lovely poem here. The emotions you express are so powerful. Your poem beautifully captures the complex emotions and experiences of a burning, enduring ...
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Re: What's In a Name?
Hello, keyoishwarrior! I'm here to review your short story? Poetry collection? Sorry, I'm not too sure XD Your work is a captivating exploration of birth, struggle, and transcendence. The powerful ...
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Re: Stuck
Hey there, FireSpy Girl! I'm Wist and I just wanted to share my thoughts on this piece. The raw and honest emotions expressed here really hit close to home. It ...
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Re: Babbling
Hello, Lullaby! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your lovely poem here. Your use of imagery in this piece is truly captivating. The juxtaposition of the majestic birds against ...
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Re: The birth of Marcus and Jude
Hello, Vampricone! I’m here to leave a short review of your lovely short story here. I found it to be a captivating addition to Marcus’ backstory, shedding light on Vittoria’s ...
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Re: Afraid of Losing You
Hello, Winny! I'm Wist and I'm here to leave a short review for your poem here. Now, I didn't read the genre tags before diving in, so I was fully ...
Jul 26, 2024 -
Re: m a r r y m e?
Hello, Kate! I'm here to review another one of your poems. I see we're on the more emotional side of things today. It's not quite sad, but more heartfelt and ...
Jul 25, 2024 -
Re: Marry mee?
And we're back to the sugary-sweet-making-readers-prediabetic Kate poems. Hello, friend! You can probably already guess that I'm here to review your poem. This one is sweet, simple, and sounds like ...
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Re: Streetlights
Hello, Ezra! Or Novea if you prefer that ^^ I'm Wist, and I'm here to review your lovely poem here. Your lines are short, but that only shows your beautiful ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: That One Old Screensaver
Hello, Kate! I love this poem. There's such a genuine feeling behind it, but it also has an interesting metaphor that makes it feel like yours. It's a lovely crossover ...
Jul 22, 2024 -
Re: Time Passes
Hello, Lim! I'm unsure if I've ever reviewed your poetry before, but I'm glad to be reviewing it now. I've briefly seen your work in NaPo and I have to ...
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Re: Thomas’ story-Ghost House
Hello, Vampricone! I'm back to review another story of yours. This story is a relatively simple premise that builds up quite the potential for a compelling follow-up. It establishes the ...
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Re: Seyar the Chair
Hey, Kate! I am hitting you with a short review because I loved this poem and think it deserves some praise. I love how you're so creative and came up ...
Jul 19, 2024
