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Re: What was it?
Hello :) Just like to say that your imagery in this one is good, by all terms. It was good on the part of your personification and animation of natural ...
Dec 21, 2014 -
Re: Rush Hour (rewritten)
Hey, just here to read :) I'll just say that I liked it. You've got really good imagery and animation in this mini character sketch. It's a nice preconditioning to ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: playground graveyard; i miss you
Hey... Sybil here... I'll just want to say that I think this poem is great. I could sense your sadness and pain, sympathy too. I also liked the repetition of ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Etymology
I salute thee, I loved this one! It was nice and deep, it really gives dignity to its name of etymology. I liked your wording and the tone was good. ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Their Fellow Man
Hey, just dropped by... This one was intriguing by its dark tone and story... I like it :D Your wording was good and I could really feel the desperation in ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: The Truth About Life
Hello :) Sybil here to say a few things... I really really really really liked this! :) It's so sweet and true to what we humans all need now: hope. ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Sigler's Last Shot
Hello, this is Sybil to review a bit ^.^ First off, this was a nice piece :). It was very realistic because of the theme, it was constant with the ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: A Letter To Scrooge
Hello! This is Sybil, making a review! (or a comment if it ain't that long enough :P ) First of all, I'd just like to say that that was completely ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: before and after
Hello :) Sybil here... I'll just say that I really liked it. The precise choice of words that were just right to feel that lingering and lonely feeling of this ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: heart broken
Hello! This is a short, yet meaningful piece you got 'ere. I liked it ;) . Bitter sweet in a way, can feel its subtle regrets in lost love. We ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Letters from War
Hello :) Sybil here... First, I just want to say that I love it. I love it so much because it got me in the actual scene of one of ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Full Moon
Hello! Sybil here, leaving a few words or so... :) . This was a good one for me, nice attempt at writing a short thriller ;) . I liked the ...
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: Her Name was Ecstasy... she died
Hello :) Just dropped by... I really really really liked this! It wasn't depressing at all, for me. I can somehow relate...(not that I'm druggy or anything) because we all ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Paperboats are a child's dream
That was marvelous! :D It was well constructed, well chosen words and nice flow of the story! Very imaginative and somehow philosophical, in the part of the point of view ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Lauren's Fate
Hello :) here to make a comment or two. This is a good try for a novel. The story's idea is nice, though I thought it a little bit lacking ...
Dec 16, 2014
