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  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: What was it?

    Hello :) Just like to say that your imagery in this one is good, by all terms. It was good on the part of your personification and animation of natural ...

    Dec 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Rush Hour (rewritten)

    Hey, just here to read :) I'll just say that I liked it. You've got really good imagery and animation in this mini character sketch. It's a nice preconditioning to ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: playground graveyard; i miss you

    Hey... Sybil here... I'll just want to say that I think this poem is great. I could sense your sadness and pain, sympathy too. I also liked the repetition of ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: Etymology

    I salute thee, I loved this one! It was nice and deep, it really gives dignity to its name of etymology. I liked your wording and the tone was good. ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Their Fellow Man

    Hey, just dropped by... This one was intriguing by its dark tone and story... I like it :D Your wording was good and I could really feel the desperation in ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Truth About Life

    Hello :) Sybil here to say a few things... I really really really really liked this! :) It's so sweet and true to what we humans all need now: hope. ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Sigler's Last Shot

    Hello, this is Sybil to review a bit ^.^ First off, this was a nice piece :). It was very realistic because of the theme, it was constant with the ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: A Letter To Scrooge

    Hello! This is Sybil, making a review! (or a comment if it ain't that long enough :P ) First of all, I'd just like to say that that was completely ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: before and after

    Hello :) Sybil here... I'll just say that I really liked it. The precise choice of words that were just right to feel that lingering and lonely feeling of this ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Literature Re: heart broken

    Hello! This is a short, yet meaningful piece you got 'ere. I liked it ;) . Bitter sweet in a way, can feel its subtle regrets in lost love. We ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Script » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Letters from War

    Hello :) Sybil here... First, I just want to say that I love it. I love it so much because it got me in the actual scene of one of ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Full Moon

    Hello! Sybil here, leaving a few words or so... :) . This was a good one for me, nice attempt at writing a short thriller ;) . I liked the ...

    Dec 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: Her Name was Ecstasy... she died

    Hello :) Just dropped by... I really really really liked this! It wasn't depressing at all, for me. I can somehow relate...(not that I'm druggy or anything) because we all ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Paperboats are a child's dream

    That was marvelous! :D It was well constructed, well chosen words and nice flow of the story! Very imaginative and somehow philosophical, in the part of the point of view ...

    Dec 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Lauren's Fate

    Hello :) here to make a comment or two. This is a good try for a novel. The story's idea is nice, though I thought it a little bit lacking ...

    Dec 16, 2014


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber