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Re: Two Out of Three
So I know this was ages ago but I had the urge to tell you the title is inspired by a song that goes "I want you, I need you, ...
Dec 5, 2012 -
Re: And You Will Fall Apart
Actually that was exactly what I was going for. A mix between lust and hunger and regret and pain. I kind of dramatized it a lot because I was angry. ...
Jul 5, 2012 -
Re: I Am Dark, But There Is Hope
There is hope, angel. This is beautiful, i love it, and i am terribly sorry to hear this. Im here for you.
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
-_- He won. I hope mine never wins. *cries* good job, miss.
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
F is for frolic through all the flowers! U is for ukelele. N is or anywhere and anytime at all down here is the deep blue sea. This isgreat!!! Did ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Life Part 1
HEY! Im Vee. I wrote something a bit like this. But yours is very organized and much easier to follow. Mine was just random things stuck in my head. I ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family
Agreed. Though, I would change ABSOLUTELY NOTHING. This is a poetic masterpiece. If you change it, I will gasp in terror, faint, ad then get back up so I could ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Dark Pharaoh
Hmmm. Interesting. You used the words head andcore a bit too many times, and Im afraid I dont quite understand. But I dont have to. This is yours. It is ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Haha, I imagine the aftermath, she shows him the poem and goes, "and you wonder why I rejected you!! Selfish son of a-" hahahaha. This was thoroughly entertaining. Nothing like ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Nightrise
If this doesnt get featured, Im kicking someone's butt. This is awesome EtCetera!!! The topic is unique, the poem is unique. It is truely brilliant. I love the flow and ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: i hold the keys
*is speechless* wow. That was good poetry. By the way, people cant copy work. Its not allowed here. Just saying.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Kiss Me, before I Die
Oh my cheese with cherries on top! Thay was awesome!!! Is there more to this? Im reading it. I must. This ROCKS. Really you did awesome. Some typos here and ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I give.
W. O. W. That was was wcked amazing. My favorite line was "i think ill keep that lat one/the one where you hit my heart" loved it!!!! There are a ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: twistfaint<3
Love it. I do. But what in the world is it about?
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
*sniffles and stares at the ground* that, was so sad. You should try changing the rhyme scheme, t restricts the poem. But... good job anyways.
May 1, 2011