VousEsEtonnant

I laughed at your warning, because I am infact an athiest. But since when did that matter? :) there isnt much wrong with this poem, that I see. It is ...

Great idea for a poem! I think you pretty much nailed it. Just two things. when she walks through the school and is abused by the words she attempts to ...

Hey B, its Vee. Oooooookay, review time. Weellll, this poem has a nice theme, a very understandandable and relatable theme. Nitpicks: When you said and tell my friends the damned ...

Wow. This is dark stuff emotional, but dark. Some would say cliche emo, but I have felt that. It is far from cliche. You totally sum it all up here, ...

I love this poem! Its so relatable. -_- I hate it when people downplay emo. Come, look at my scars, try to put a sharp object to your skin and ...

*smiles alittle* i like this. I think that all these reviewers have good points, but they dont see the BIG PICTURE. I know what it is like to feel safe ...

I was all "awwwe! We are so much like this!" Then i neared the end and went "what the hell?" Then "ohhh!" Funny how who it w- but nevermind, this ...

When you get a short review, you know that you have done well. I assume this is a friend you speak to? It's quite bittersweet. Almost as if you are ...

This has such a nice lyric flow to it, I keep singing "play your piano, piano boy" (please excuse me if i go off on a personal tangent. I do ...

Contrary to most here, i think the repetitive "she" and "her" emphasizes how she is the center of your world. I like this poem because i can relate to it. ...

This poem is actually kind of amusing to me. I personally enjoy spiders, as well as snakes, but that is irrelavent. The one thing that confused me was your begining. ...

Bravo! You are amazing, or as i like to say, "vous es etonnant" the flow was a tad choppy at times, but nothing worth correcting. I enjoyed the part in ...

This was very humerous. I personally do not usually write in such an openly personal way, and so at times i was a bit wary to read some of these, ...

Well, i must say, it's impressive. Though the begining and end are alittle loose, the basic storyline takes perfect sensre and is quite interesting. When i finished reading i felt ...

I must disagree with everyone here. I think that when i read this poem, I was infact expecting more. But, upon reading it, i was blown away with understanding and ...