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Vivian

Vivian

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: fort

    WTF. Not while she's in it right?

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Love you, not loved.

    Sorry for your loss, you wrote a great poem though.

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Letter

    I'm crying. If that was the reaction you wanted you got it. ToT

    Oct 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Her time of the month

    I knew that's what you were talking about. What a great boyfriend.

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Definition of Ignorance

    I really know ignorance, everyone in the world is a victim of her hate.

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The shortest halloween poem ever

    Done. It is just so simple and really tells the main idea of Halloween. You are a wonderful poet for being able to convey that in the simplest three lines ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Monster

    Thanks, and yes I'll fix that.

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Monster

    Alright thanks for pointing those out. I'll try and be more clear in my revisions.

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Granny

    Firstly, I'm very sorry for your loss, that's not something I can imagine going through. My only nitpick is in the capitalization of "god" when addressing the Creator, oh and ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Down By the Old Mill Stream

    I don't know. Human selfishness. ;p

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: An Idea

    A million likes because I feel your pain, it's worse when you have short term memory loss.

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Take Me Back

    Your Welcome.

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Take Me Back

    This poem is nostalgia in a bottle. It's wonderful, beautifully written. Welcome to the site.

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Once Had a Dream

    That's adulthood.

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I want to _____

    Your world sounds like a paradise. :) ^O^

    Oct 19, 2014


Poetry comes alive to me through recitation.
— Natalie Merchant