Virgil

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the poem.

Thanks for the review! We'll definitely consider the critiques you've given.

You are lovely, Bisc! We'll be addressing these as we go it seems and we're going to try and fix this up a bit. Thanks again!

Woah, this poem is ancient. How'd you end up reviewing it, if I may ask? Reviewing content from the Green Room might do you better than my old and mediocre ...

I know I didn't say this before, but more unusual rhyme schemes are a possibility. But that's the thing, they're still schemes or patterns that you create or follow, and ...

Ah, I didn't notice that! Thanks for the clarification.

Slant rhymes* which is basically an imperfect rhyme or half-rhyme that isn't quite a rhyme. They can be used well, though they shouldn't be used all the time. I'm glad ...

Ah okay. Would have liked more clarity on that part because it did seem as if you were trying to depict that. Thanks for the clarification though.

Thanks for the review!

No problem! Glad I helped you out. Practice makes perfect, and it's okay that English isn't your native language. You're learning, and that's what matters!

I couldn't see it all that well, but judging from the language that you use it's something of a Bible reference, or it has Biblical themes involved, but I couldn't ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you've been out and about reviewing lately because it's been pleasant to see you grow in your critique. If you ever want tips on ...

I don't believe it's that primarily making the poem with sporadic capitalization and punctuation, though I do suggest taking a picture in another document and uploading that in the Publishing ...

Glad the review helped! Thanks for the clarification between the half-angel and half-demon aspect of the poem, because it helped.

Ah, thank you for the explanation! I find it odd that you think that about capitalization, because I usually don't use it unless it's regular grammar rules or there's no ...