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  • Other » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Suicide Note PROMPT.

    This is Kaos here for a review. Even if you rate it with "Mature Content and +16" it could be wise to leave a sort of note at the beginning ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: The hand that first held mine

    This is Kaos here for a review! We were complete opposites, like drought and a hurricane, She dried me out and I watered her down. But somehow, we still blossomed. ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Satire Re: Donald Trump: The Dumbest Man in America

    This is Kaos here for a review! Donald Trump shouldn’t be President of the United States. First, he has no experience in politics. Secondly, he lies way too much. Also, ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: -Gravedigger-

    This is Kaos here for a review! [I've never put much stock in rumours, because rumours are not true.] I liked these two first lines of the poem, though they ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Not dying, but falling in love

    This is Kaos here for a review! Sitting with our legs dangling off the back of my car, mainstream Passion Pit blaring from the speaker. We are a high school ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Like A Paper

    This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with the poem is that it's worded so awkwardly and the flow is messy. It just feels really unorganized as ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just Tell Me

    This is Kaos here for a review! I really liked the concepts or themes of the poem as they were relatable and felt like they worked. One of my main ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: a background of blood blossoms

    This is Kaos here for a review because I owe you my 200th. the conversation dances to the rhythm of my sleep apnea; for some reason they're worried whenever I ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Summer

    This is Kaos here for a review! First off, all of the story is in bold, which isn't really necessary and can hurt the reader's eyes. Just pointing it out ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Paper Airplane

    This is Kaos here for a review! I was thinking for a while. After some time, I felt this overwhelming sense; a need to breathe; a need to run; a ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: So Alone

    This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with the poem is that it didn't go into any sorts of depths. The lines were really short which restricted ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Universe Machine

    This is Kaos here for a review! I felt like this poem really suffered from the length of it, where you could have either taken some of the things out ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Pessimist

    This is Kaos here for a review! (Please don't murder me if this is bad I'm not good at reviewing prose.) This world is a pathetic existence. Each day all ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: A woman's desire

    This is Kaos here for a short review, as there isn't much content to go off of, but nonetheless, let's get into it! The imagery in this poem is nothing ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Flushed Cheeks

    This is Kaos here for a review! I'm just going to jump right into this and say that just because someone can write pretty imagery doesn't make the poem good. ...

    Sep 5, 2016


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