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  • Other » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Suicide Note PROMPT.

    This is Kaos here for a review. Even if you rate it with "Mature Content and +16" it could be wise to leave a sort of note at the beginning ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: The hand that first held mine

    This is Kaos here for a review! We were complete opposites, like drought and a hurricane, She dried me out and I watered her down. But somehow, we still blossomed. ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Satire Re: Donald Trump: The Dumbest Man in America

    This is Kaos here for a review! Donald Trump shouldn’t be President of the United States. First, he has no experience in politics. Secondly, he lies way too much. Also, ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: -Gravedigger-

    This is Kaos here for a review! [I've never put much stock in rumours, because rumours are not true.] I liked these two first lines of the poem, though they ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Not dying, but falling in love

    This is Kaos here for a review! Sitting with our legs dangling off the back of my car, mainstream Passion Pit blaring from the speaker. We are a high school ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Like A Paper

    This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with the poem is that it's worded so awkwardly and the flow is messy. It just feels really unorganized as ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just Tell Me

    This is Kaos here for a review! I really liked the concepts or themes of the poem as they were relatable and felt like they worked. One of my main ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: a background of blood blossoms

    This is Kaos here for a review because I owe you my 200th. the conversation dances to the rhythm of my sleep apnea; for some reason they're worried whenever I ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Summer

    This is Kaos here for a review! First off, all of the story is in bold, which isn't really necessary and can hurt the reader's eyes. Just pointing it out ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Paper Airplane

    This is Kaos here for a review! I was thinking for a while. After some time, I felt this overwhelming sense; a need to breathe; a need to run; a ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: So Alone

    This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with the poem is that it didn't go into any sorts of depths. The lines were really short which restricted ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Universe Machine

    This is Kaos here for a review! I felt like this poem really suffered from the length of it, where you could have either taken some of the things out ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Pessimist

    This is Kaos here for a review! (Please don't murder me if this is bad I'm not good at reviewing prose.) This world is a pathetic existence. Each day all ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: A woman's desire

    This is Kaos here for a short review, as there isn't much content to go off of, but nonetheless, let's get into it! The imagery in this poem is nothing ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Flushed Cheeks

    This is Kaos here for a review! I'm just going to jump right into this and say that just because someone can write pretty imagery doesn't make the poem good. ...

    Sep 5, 2016


Follow your passion. Stay true to yourself. Never follow someone else's path unless you're in the woods and you're lost and you see a path. By all means, you should follow that.
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