Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! One of the first things I noticed was the choice of repetition in the poem and I don't think that it did anything ...

This is Kaos here for a review! No light around me A pit of sadness and grief Whoever will set me free I didn't really feel that the haikus, either ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed in the poem that I noticed is the rhyming. It doesn't seem to have a pattern because ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Buried with homework, down in the dumps, feeling run down, and taken over with fatigue. The first four lines here in the poem ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Honestly, I wish for nothing more. Nothing more than for your eyes to be opened by the light to see me. Because I ...

This is Kaos here for a review. My main problem with this was that the thoughts felt very general. They didn't really go into depth about what it all meant. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! And just like leaves their hearts fell Suffering down from their branches Where they’d been held and nurtured Every heart must leave its ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Darling, I am no poet I stand before you With a jar of paste And the prettiest words That I cut from a ...

This is Kaos here for a review! need some shivering cold air, frozen sprinkle of snowflakes. where play those tinged colour through the horizon. The first line didn't really make ...

This is Kaos here for a review! You start off with the line "You're my sweet little phoenix" which I thought could have been saved for later in the poem, ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I didn't get why you capitalized all the "you"s and "yours" or anything like that and it annoyed me. It stuck straight out, ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The flow in the first stanza is or feels a tiny bit off to me when you read it aloud because a lot ...

This is Kaos here for a review. People ask me questions and they expect an answer. What do I do when I can’t? What if I know the answer, but ...

This is Kaos here for a review. Before I start the poem I'd like to say that I don't quite know if you intended to have stanzas in this but ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So the reader already knows the theme of the poem just by reading the title and personally, I like themes that can make ...