Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! Starting off to point out the giant block of text that you have in the middle of your piece, I strongly suggest that ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I've been reading your poems and they all seem to sort of follow this sort of style that feels like rap because it's ...

This is Kaos here for a review! This is something that I didn't want to pass up on reviewing since I saw it. The work that you have here doesn't ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So this is quite the mess that you have here, as I feel with the rest of your poems, a good mess that ...

Let's give this a shot. So this poem interested me in that it was directed towards 'you' which from what I understand is the universal or general 'you'. I wondered ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So there was an interesting usage of white space in this poem and I thought it was a quite wonderful addition to the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So, this poem interested me in the fact that it was based on an actual person and I usually don't enjoy things that ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So I felt on a spiritual level with amelie on this one is that the poem didn't really do anything new, at least ...

First off, welcome to YWS and nice to meet you. Onto the poem. I often find it hard to actually capture what prose-poetry is, but I do like the experimental ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So, this poem is topic-based, on OCD, and it shows that it's topic-based. By the end of the poem it just becomes a ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So, let's jump right into this. I wanted to talk about the ending first since it'll help spark the rest of the argument. ...

So, Mara, I haven't reviewed your poetry before I don't think, so I'll give it a go. The first thing that I noticed was the "LOVE:" and I'm not really ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I tend to be iffy when people do Roman numerals in poetry, but I felt like this worked here and that it fit. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So fantasy related poetry is something that almost always interests me because I'm not one who's really ever written it, and it all ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this piece is the large blocks of text, particularly in the beginning of the chapter. I ...