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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Sacrilege

    This is Kaos here for a review! Just because something sounds cool doesn't mean it is cool, and that's the main thing I felt about this poem. That's not to ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Resuscitator and Virulent Air

    This is Kaos here for a review! So I always like to see attempts at prose poetry, and this is no exception. Jumping right into the poem, it seems to ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Four Lines

    This is Kaos here for a review! Another touchy topic, so I'll treat it as such. We see that this tackles the idea of a broken family and this is ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Red Warriors

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is something that seems to be a touchy topic, so I will treat it as such. I'm never one to be ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: This Must Be The Placenta

    This is Kaos here for a review! At one point in time, my face had a view of downtown. Jumping right into this, I liked the start of the poem ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Hear Me Whimpe- Roar.

    This is Kaos here for a review! I see that this is prose poetry and that's something that always interests me, so let's jump right into this. The repetition is ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    This is Kaos here for a review! So we see that this poem plays with what seems to be the universal "you" which has always been something that interests me ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Compass

    This is Kaos here for a review! A poem with the topic of a compass, let's jump right into this. The flow in this poem doesn't really work for me, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Invisible butterflies

    This is Kaos here for a review! So this is different from your usual style, and that interests me. The structure for the first few stanzas tends to stay generally ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Is There

    This is Kaos here for a review! Quite the touchy topic that you tackle here and from the title I didn't really get a sense of what was going to ...

    Dec 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: blue-haired girl

    This is Kaos here for a review! So I don't think I've ever reviewed a work from you before, so let's give it a shot. The first thing I noticed ...

    Dec 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: hero

    This is Kaos here for a review! I thought that this was a cool concept for a poem, and that's pretty much as far as it goes for me. I ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Blue Ocean Eyes

    Looks like I'm going to try. The stuff in parentheses seems to overpower the set of lyrics and it seems to be that those parts are sung quieter than the ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 pm

    This is Kaos here for a review! I love seeing attempts at prose poetry since no one ever seems to be good at it from the get-go and it takes ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Why I Am a Good Rapper

    Kaos here for a review. It doesn't really seem like you're trying to write rap here that much, it just seems like you're trying to get attention with this. It ...

    Dec 27, 2016


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