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Re: Underdog
This is Nikayla here for a review! Since you wrote this in the jam pad that was open, I decided that I would review this. And I have to say, ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: mint-like.
This is Nikayla here for a review as promised! Sorry this took so long to get out. I kept forgetting about it and kept getting distracted. It seems that you're ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: rejuvenate
This is Nikayla here for a final review on your three poems. I was a little interested in why you chose to put the whole poem on the right this ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: forget
This is Nikayla dropping in for another review! So this is a poem that interested me more than the other one I just reviewed, but I've found they have similar ...
Jan 22, 2017 -
Re: starlight
Oh yes. You know that I am here for a review. Since I already know some background from the poetry jam, let's jump right into this! The first stanza gives ...
Jan 22, 2017 -
Re: Midnights and Storms
This is Nikayla here for a review as promised! As you already know, I enjoy this poem, but let's jump into the review nonetheless! The first stanza felt awkward with ...
Jan 22, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 1.1 - Falling Girls
This is Nikayla here for a review! As you know, I'm not the best at reviewing prose, but I'll jump right into the review and try the best I can. ...
Jan 21, 2017 -
Re: forgiveness
This is Nikayla here for a review! This is quite the short poem, so I'm going to jump right into it. The title isn't something that I was really pulled ...
Jan 21, 2017 -
Re: I Love You is a Courtesy
This is Nikayla here for a review! So this was an interesting read. I'm going to jump right into the poem, so here we go. I wasn't a huge fan ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: You Are
This is Nikayla here a review. I'm going to go ahead and go through all of my actual critiques for the poem so that I can get them out of ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: wunder.
This is Nikayla here for a review! I'm wondering (Haha, puns.) a bit about your title choice and I think that perhaps you could have chosen something stronger as 'wunder' ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: The Egret
This is Nikayla here for a review! This is lovely. The first thing I wanted to note is that I couldn't tell if the style it was taken is a ...
Jan 19, 2017 -
Re: When Venus Smiled
This is Nikayla here for a review! I thought that the concept for the poem is something quite interesting, and let's jump into that. You use an event that relates ...
Jan 19, 2017 -
Re: Sweet Teeth
This is Nikayla here for a review! The tone in this poem is one of the things that confused me about it--particularly the ending. It comes off as something humorous ...
Jan 19, 2017 -
Re: Rubble and Ashes
This is Nikayla here for a review! I liked some of the imagery that you had in the poem, but overall I think it was too vague for me to ...
Jan 19, 2017
