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Re: Cassadiss
This is Kayla here dropping in for a review on your latest rhyme spitting. So, a mixtape of this would be fire, let's just get this out of the way. ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: o.1 a girl swallows a lunar eclipse
Hi there, Pomp, I'm hopping in for a review. I have to admit that I'm mixed on this one. I see that this is the first in a series, and ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Stuck
This is Nikayla here hopping in for a quick review for a quick poem! I see that this is a pair of quatrains, which is interesting that you decided the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: When Doing Nothing is Doing Everything
This is Nikayla here dropping in with a review. I have to say that this was pretty beccalicious itself. I agree with Lumi and most of what he said for ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Dark Paradise
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I see that this is based off a song, one that I have not heard before. I'm going to go ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: burial of a boy
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I haven't reviewed your poetry in awhile, so I'm here to hop in. Let's jump right in. in the coffin, he ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: partial/heaving.
Oh, you. This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I've already told you that I adore this piece, but let's get more into why, and how you can ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: Demons in the Street-NaPo for 4/24/17
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I'm a little confused as to why you listed this as 'Other' if this is pulled from your NaPo thread. Regardless ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: NaPo 2017 Entry 1: Don't
Hi there, Mem! This is Nikayla here jumping in for a review. I saw this in the Green Room and decided to pick it up from there! We're regressing a ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: North Dakota (I miss you)(I love you)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I both could and couldn't believe that this is still sitting in the Green Room. Though, I'm here to fix that ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Shirin says to Khosrow
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I saw that this was still in the Green Room, which is reasonable because even I am intimidated to review this ...
Apr 26, 2017 -
Re: the essence of you in springtime
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I could see this as an ode, almost, as Hannah points out how it's dedicated and based on a single person. ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: a time before
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Admittedly, I don't believe that this piece is your strongest, though at first I wasn't able to put my finger on ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: Love
Hi there, Tamilwriter, and welcome to the site! This is Nikayla dropping in for a quick review. I noticed that you labelled this under 'poetry' which makes sense to me, ...
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: How to kill a wizard: Chapter 2
This is Kayla dropping in for another review on this awesome novel. "This Chapter is not at funny as the last", At least you're being honest. I still do expect ...
Apr 21, 2017
