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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loved Then Put Aside

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I believe that I reviewed a short story part of yours earlier today (if it wasn't you then I apologize) though ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I need to find a better introduction, though I always imagine being in a firefighter suit and going down the pole ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: fin

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! You're back I saw! Exciting. Well, let's jump right in. love is muscular dystrophy. i can feel the earth cave in ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/4

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested! I see that this is the first part of a short story. The title is interesting, so we'll have ...

    Jul 18, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Review, Other Re: Entrance Essay

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested! Interesting. So this is an entrance essay to the place you're wanting to go, yes? I haven't reviewed something ...

    Jul 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 3

    I'm actually here! Sorry that this is a little late, though Nikayla is finally here dropping in for a review. I noticed that this is quite fluid when this comes ...

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The curious case of two orphan eggs

    Hi there, Soso! I see you're new to the site, so I welcome you to YWS. If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me or any ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 2

    Hi there Lightsong! Nikayla here dropping in for a review as promised. With a bursting speed aided by the fire wheels behind her, Rila darted passed Ilami to Gael. She ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I dreamed about you

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Makes sense that this is a phone poem because I feel some polish could be added here. This is mainly relating ...

    Jul 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Goodbye

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review, as requested! Unsure of why every line is capitalized, though I assume this is a stylistic choice. Similar to the last ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: As Things Became Real

    Hi there, EKK15! This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as promised. Summer’s hand had its grip on my back the foreign Virginian heat made my skin blister ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: lie

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I understand what you're attempting to do here, though I'm not sure that this is fully gotten across. I'm a fan ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.2

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I'm on a roll for being here earlier than usual. Hopefully I can keep this up with the later chapters too. ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Save Your Scissors

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Haven't read any poetry from you lately, though it seems that you haven't been writing any. Or at least, you haven't ...

    Jul 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cannot Be Touched, Heard, or Seen / Not a Matter, is Mute, and Invisible

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review, as promised! Apologies for getting to this a little later than I expected, though I'm here now. Without further ado, let's ...

    Jul 10, 2017


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