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Re: Pit Fall
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This is a really cool poem! I can’t believe that I didn’t click on it last week when you wrote it. At ...
Aug 22, 2020 -
Re: Haikus
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give your wonderful haikus a review! I was so happy when I saw that these haikus are ACTUALLY haikus. They follow the 5-7-5 rule and are ...
Aug 21, 2020 -
Re: Neighborhood Tales: The Tale of a Hedgehog (Prologue)
Hello and welcome to YWS! VioletFantasy here to review your very interesting prologue. I really enjoyed this! Your narrator is hilarious and fun to listen to. His/her way of rambling ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 3.3]
Heya Mage! I’m back to review the next part of chapter three! I definitely agree with this part being grouped with the third chapter in the novel. It finishes of ...
Aug 19, 2020 -
Re: Text
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review and to welcome you to YWS!! If you have any questions or need some help with anything, I’m here for you! Now, ...
Aug 17, 2020 -
Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 3.1]
Hello! Yet another wonderful chapter Mage!! I’m officially invested in your story. All of these disappearances are very intriguing. What has happened to them all and how will Quinn and ...
Aug 16, 2020 -
Re: Madhouse: Part 1
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I loved this! I was a little sceptical when I read the description of your story, since haunted houses and reality TV ...
Aug 15, 2020 -
Re: What a Wonderful World--REVISED
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I saw that a few people didn’t like your poem very much down in the comments, but I think it’s awesome! I ...
Aug 15, 2020 -
Re: The sun and moon
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review and welcome you to YWS! If you ever have questions or need anything else, feel free to contact me! Now, onto the ...
Aug 14, 2020 -
Re: Yangtze Home
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This is a really cool poem. It’s the perfect length in my opinion. It’s long enough to have a good amount of ...
Aug 14, 2020 -
Re: Freeze Frame
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This poem is really catchy! I think it could work as a poem or even a song. It’s very relatable too. I ...
Aug 14, 2020 -
Re: Barnyard Cats
Hello! VioletFantasy here for a short review. This was a really sweet poem! I am a crazy cat lady in-training, so the title immediately piqued my interest. I was not ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: I dream.
Hello! VioletFantasy here to review this cool little poem you wrote. I really enjoyed it! I think we all wonder at some point in our lives what it would be ...
Aug 12, 2020 -
Re: disseat
Hello! I really like this poem! I think it’s very that you used the word disseat as the title and in the poem. I never hear that word! It’s a ...
Aug 11, 2020 -
Re: Jabbermock
Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I love this so much!! I haven’t read the Jabberwocky poem in awhile, but it is one of my favorites. You did ...
Aug 10, 2020
